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1. yo guyx!! here is the next part of the story. rythi waane kammah ummedhu kuran. dhn evvex problem ei othiyyaa buneladhinyma ekan rangalhu kohla dheynan. dhnn next part maadhan or fahareiga mirey wex up kohla dhyfaanan. so wish guys loved this part too. thank you for your support…

2. tooo short… bt salhi stry…

3. mi liyefa in goi not ok. mi buny change the format. hyvany poem eh hen.

   1. You are right fathun

4. V short ingey ..next part dhigu kohllrnan dhw…btw vaahaka vrh reethi…next part vrh kiyr hiyy vejje..?

5. Foohi kamuge inthiha liyefa oiy gothunves kiyaa iru bolah undhagoo

6. Plx change the format.. kiyanvx undhagoo nd mihn huryma story akaa vahtharehvx noon.. btw story ix nice

7. Nyc ekm maa boda kureeee

8. Haadha kurey.. Thanklheh dhigukoh genesdheebala

9. too short.

10. Good try but too short. Try to improve your work

11. Alhe liyan biruntha thiulhenee? ?????
    Nice story.

12. Haadha kurey. And huvany poem eh liyefahen. Story eh faadakah nun miyothy.

13. Too short. And dont like the formet also. But i think the story will be nice. So pls improve those points. ?

14. Heyuvaane sukunah visnaigen liyeba, Alifu and Shaviyani ei ehaa undagu ehchehtha olhuvaalan? imlaakuh ginavima varah undagu kiyan! hurun, inun, othun beynunkurumuge hamathahves daskurun eden

15. fahun varah reethi vaane henn hyvany

16. Tooo short
    story adhi varah kuriahdhaane
    varah salhi
    Maaahaa Allah

17. V reethi vaahaka

18. reethi..

19. Dear haadha kurey…dhigukoh genesdhehchey nxt part…?

20. vv nice..

21. dhn thihaa kurukh genes dhey irun kada.. mi ah vure rangalhu vrrne knme two days fahun dhigu kh genes dhinas..

22. Mee lhemeh tha???

23. Vaahaka salhi. But liyefa in gothun undagoo kiyan. Poem liyaa gotha liyefa iny

24. Dhigukolleema ok vaane, keep it up,

25. vvvvvvvvvvv reethi story eh
    adhi tankholheh kolleema vvvvvvvvv reethi vaane

    1. Adhi dhigu kolleema good

26. Komme dhuvahaku vaahaka gennaaanamey kiyaaafa thy vaavaraky.. Nuvanyaa huttaalaaafa geyga ovebala

27. Mee vaahaka ehtha noony lhemeh tha??? Vaahaka thiyefa huri gothun bolah undhagoovey… Plz change the format.. Okay… Vaaahakaige next part kon irakunthw upload vaaany???? Waiting…

28. Reethi .. font rangalhu kohhlyma ok vaane.. and yes.. next part mi ah vure long kohllahchcheyyy .. maa kury

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