އިންތިޒާރުގައި ހުރިން…..
“ޒިން…..؟” “ޒިން…. އަޅެފަހެ މިތާ ދެންމެ ހުރީ މިހާރު ކޮބާތަ..؟ޒިން؟؟؟ ” ސުމާ ދެ އައިސްކޯން ހިފައިގެން ހުރެ 3 އަހަރުގެ “ޒިން” އަށް ގޮވަމުން ދިޔައެވެ. ތަނަކީ މީހުން ގިނަ ތަނެއް ކަމުން އޭނާ ގެއްލިވެސް ދާނެއެވެ.
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ޒިން!!!!!” ސުމާ ޒިން ފެނުމާއި އެކު ތަންކޮޅެއް ބާރަށް ގޮވާލިއެވެ. މާޒިންވެސް އަދި ޒިންވެސް އެއްފަހަރާ ސުމާއާއި ދިމާ ބަލައިލިއެވެ. މާޒިން ކޮޅަށް ތެދުވިއެވެ. އަދި ސުމާ އަންނަތަން ބަލަން ހުރެވުނީ ދަންނަ ކުއްޖެއްތޯ ވަކިކުރުމަށެވެ.
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“ލައްބަ އެކަމް ޒިންގެ ބައްޕި އެއް ނުހުރެ.. މަންމި ބުނީ ބައްޕި ވީ ޒިން ކުދައިރު ކޮންމެވެސް ތާކަށް ގޮހޭ.” މާޒިންގެ ސިކުނޑީގައި ޒިންގެ އެ ބަސްކޮޅު އެނބުރެމުން ދިޔައެވެ.
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“އެކަމް…. އެކަމް ޒިން ސުމްދެކެ ލޯބި ނުވާއިރު ކީއްކު..ރަން އިންތިޒާރު ކުރާނީކީ…. ހީ ވިލް ނައު ހޭވް އަ ލައިފް……” ސުމާއަށް ކުއްލިއަކަށް ވިސްނުނެވެ. ދެލޯ ކަރުނުން ފުރުނީ އެހެންވެގެންނެވެ.
ވަރަށް އަވަހަށް އަންނަނީ…………
އިންތިޒާރު ކޮށްލައްވާ 🙂
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hey guys.. oh gd aftr a lnnnnng tym dhw.. hehe its a new stry by me.. i wil strt to uplwd it soon.. hykuran hurihaa kudhin ah vx rythi vaane kamah n mi trailr vx.. miss u al.. 😉 c u soon til than tc …
Lemme guess maazin is the dad?!
haha lts see dhw 🙂 thnkx
Its obvio??
now also can imagine whats gonna happen next
hehe thnkx 😉
Oh ryn… This is so swyt ingey.. V rythi feshumeh nd mihaaruvx mi vaahaka kiyaa hih vejje.. nxt part avahah up kohdhehchey…
hehe thnkyww…. n in sha allah vrh avahah uplwd khla dheynan 🙂
Waitinggggggg
thnkyww 🙂 kyp waitin
Yayyyyy…ryyyn is back ….??????WAITING WAITING
haha. happpy to c ur cmmnt naanu 😉 thnkywww.. kyp waitinn..
ryn ge story ehen stories thakaa thafaathuvaane kamah ummeedhu kuran….
i mean as if i m not wrng mi storyga vaanehen heevaagothakee suma n maazin ge past ga vee kameige sababun zin libeynee n maazin duxnt knw abt it at all..n may b sumaa maazin aa dhirah dhiyaa cux actually in de past they didnt have any relationship..but some how they got in a situation whr they both cross de limits..blah blah…suma raised her child alone by herself…n the story goes like maazin knws abt it n how he tries to make up with suma for de sake of their child..throughout they both faces alot of things..n finally at de end happy ending..? hahah…dn mee hama guess ei..cux it happens in most de stories here…so i wnt u to make it different n prove me wrong..heheh?
good luck wit it..hope v all cn get to read this story ASAP?
hahaha.. nyc try… bt lt c wht realy happns. n tbh its totally diffrnt frm othrs…:) bt happy to c sumthin lyk this. nvr expctd lolxx.. bt nt bad… gud try 😉 n in sha allah i wil strt uplwdin soon…
btw sp ga einee sumaa tha..cux i cnt c her face? story up kuraairuga fennaane dhw…??
haha yrh its suma… hahaha may b u wil c hr face… i wil try to shw it haha bt actually salhi grl eh in pic eh nulibunu i myn the way i wnt… so i jxt did this 😛
avahahh up kurahchey run ge inthizaaruga hunnathaa kn dhuvaheh…..waiting waiting
ryn*
hehe thnkx.. in sha allah i will mke it soon 😉
nishuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu … alheyyyyy .. varah handhaaan vi ryn n ur stories mathin .. hehehe .. asluvess v miss vi .. btw new stry eh dhww.. hmm v interesting .. kon dhuvahakun upload kuran fashany? .. mihaaru mihiry kiyaa hithun kehmadhuvefa hehe .. avahah up kohdhehchey rynuu .. n kobaatha ehkala stry tht hindu wala stry? e stry kon dhuvahakun up kurany ? .. hehehe v suvaalu gina dhw .. n yah bajiyaa will tc abadhuvess 😛 .. haha .. miss u n tvvgc ryn .. all the best .. 🙂 😉
owh my my bajiyaathuuuuu.. 😛 alhey ryn vrrhh miss v lai mathin…. ummm in sha allah mi wyk ga up kuran fashaanan… hehehe… lahba vrh avas kh up kuraanan.. 😉 tht stry dhw.. i dnt think it wil b gud.. i tlkd to sumone who is lyk hve knwldge abt evrythin dhw i myn vrh dhyny… n he tld me its gud stry i myn it includes al dhyny prts dhw. bt neyngign vx u may include sumthin which may b nt gud… so i said okayy dhn i wil nt uplwd it.. n mst of the rydrs also dnt lyk it dhw ehnve.. hehehe… hahahah haan ur my suvaal gwwni 😛 😉 hahaha bajiyaaass *dhahi* hehehe tc c u.. n vrhhhh miss vey.. ltttttttttttttts luv 😉
Lng tym n c yur stry… varah habeyx feshun…. ehaa ginadhuvahu inthixaaru nukuru vahchey… :p miss yuh ryn… <3
yrh dhw.. hehehe lahba wil mke it soon.. miss u mre.. 😉 kyp waitin
Waiiiiting waiiiittiiing… Its a plessure to get a story by u again
hehe kyp waaaiiiiitinnnn…. thnkyww 😉 n it ws a plsure to me too to uplwd a stryy again 😉
I guess its gonna be v intresting soo looking forward for this
thnkyw 😉
ryn hope 2 c da stry soon… missed u n ur strys 🙂
thnkkxx… hehe n i missd uplwdin n cmmntin too
missed u mommy , ur new story dw , nice start , btw happy mothers’ day 🙂
aww heyy doc… missd u vrhhh.. yrh new one.. hehe thnkyww… n thaaankxxxx my luvv.. frst n lst wish mthrs dayge..bt lst ah vaany vx fr few yrs dhw.. aftr tht……….. 😛 hehe vrrrhh miss veyy.. tc docccyyyyyy.. n aslu vrh happy v wish khlyma tday i ws missin u.. mthrs day v ma kahneynge 😉
Dhn alhe marsha ge story eh kiyaalan libeyny kn dhuvahakun tha v wait kurevey marsha ge story akahh…..my favourite writers …ryn .marsha. kamana n ushali luv u all…..
aww yrh dhw… marsha ge stry thah vrh rythi ryn vx kiyameyy.. evn m waitin fr it… hwp we cn c it soon…. n thnkxx… 😉 luv u too…
Thi vaahaka ah wait kuraathaa haadha dhuvahekey…
Please upload soon….??❤❤
alhey thnkx.. 😉 wil uplwd soon in sha allah 😉
Yeah. Marzin is the dad dhww. Hehe. Its a nice one. Intresring. ?
Dhn avas kohbaaaa!!!! Can’t wait muchhh….