ލޮތްބެއް މަ ނޭދެން ޔާރު ނޫން – 13

60 Comments!

1. Mi part ves varah reethi curiously waiting for next part??

   1. Thanks QueenB insha’Allah next part soon💜🦋

2. this story is so unrealistic.. reporter eh ge athuga bidi alhuvaigen dhaairu ehen reporters madakun nuthibeyneh… adhi police meehun ves ehenneh nugendhaane professionalism huri meehaku… adhi haasa koh ekahala muhinmu scene eh gai…. maa romantic kuran beynun viyas bodu varu… n genetic kiyaairu ihnaany javiyani… balaes nulaa vaahaka liyaa author eh kan faahgavey varah…. mikahala bai thah ahnaathy story hama nujehe…

   1. Yeah i also got stuck on that prt. I dnt think anybody wud do that in a real life situation. i always found this story a bit over the top with cheesy lines and cringeness. but this was cherry on top. its so bad

   2. I get what Ur coming from anonymous.. this is just a story.. real life ga hageegathuga higaafa oii kameh noon.. ehenve unrealistic vumaky vedhaane kameh.. adhi rukainmenge scene ehkoh nunime.. reporters ge reaction dhen oii ep ga onnaane.. genetic ge bai eii typing mistakes eh.. and Ur right maash ah ragalhah balaanula up kurevifa eyny.. story kiyaalaafa feedback eh dhinyma thankyou.. Insha Allah dhen oii Bai thakuga ebai thah ragalhukohlaanan💜🦋

   3. Thankyou for the feedback Anonymous 💜🦋

   4. realistic vaan jehey dho kommes varakah…ehen liyelaaha otheema varah sakaraai… thihen veeya e ai buri es amilla ah harakaai kuran veenu🤔🤔

   5. Thibuny vx thedheh.. realistic komme vx varakah vaanjeheyne.. dhen oii baiga ragalhukohlaanan💜🦋

   6. Ey bunan vaahakaeh.. Konmehen maash liyaa vaahaka eh v ma maash ah bully kuraane kameh ney!! If you are so perfect typing mistake eh nujassa vaahaka eh liyelabala.. We r humans, HUMANS CAN MAKE MISTAKES. HUMANS ARE NOT PERFECT. Recheck kuriyas sometimes loluga alhaey nugannaane e thankolhey, eiy amilla meeha liyunu eycheh v ma. Mashah vx mi kala kanthakaa vrh ginain jehunu. Important project eh ga vx. This proves that humans are not perfect. Vaahaka hadi viyya nukiya hurey!!
      Maash ah Abadhuves support dhey i will be there!! You r one of my favs!! Abadhuves mi story ah inthizaaru kurevey. Story dhaa goiy alhugan’dah vrh kamufhey. Maasha Allah!!
      Alway wish you a brighter future!!
      Takr care💗💗 lots of luv maash

   7. Thanks darl I appreciate Ur support but please be respectful to others.. I’m happy U liked the story.. love you more darl💜🦋

3. heyy maash dhahthaaaaaa
   masha allah mi part vrhhh reethi
   Aaiiitherii rukain haadha varakashey dhw aina fahathun e ulheny..aina ah dhww mi notice v eh ingili madhukan vs….azeen kyh e kury…haadha goahey…dhin r dhunya r dhemedhah vahnann dhwww e ulheny???
   eyru dhunya dhiyaee….ethaaga dhiyaee eh noahnaane…dhn enme first paragraph ga eyny karuthanakuge…karunathakuge liyan vgn eyny ehn liyevifa…
   Lyyysmmm🫶🏼

   1. Heyy Aaanaa..
      Thankyou darll.. vrh ufaa vejje mi part reethi v kan enguneema.. hehe yeah rukain vrh Aina fahathun ulhey dhw eba.. hingaa azeen kurany keehtho balaalan dhww.. thanks mistakes bunelan dhineema.. Insha Allah ebai thah ragalhukohlaanan..
      Love you more darl💜🦋

4. Maash aky hama aslu koh ves rude author eh.. kiuntherin eha varah bunaa iru improve eh nukureve. Thankolheh nubaa viyya excuse dhahkaany abadhu. thimanna male dhaan jehuneemaey kiyaafa. accept your mistakes sweet heart.. mulhi story feshunu iru ves reecheh nun ekamaku mihisaaba aissa maa hadi

   1. I’m sorry U think like that.. maash abadhuvx masaikai kuran liyuntherin bunaa kankan ragalhu kohleveytho.. and I do accept my mistakes darl, midhiya ep ga ehaa mistakes hury aslah vx mal’e dhiyaama.. mihaaru vrh vaguthu vx nuvey vhk liyan.. thankyou for Ur feedback 💜🦋

5. Maash as one of ur longest readers i am disappointed in this story 🙁 u cn do better than ts..
   mi stry heevany maash maa avas aruvaalaigen liyaa story eh hn
   hama nujehey baivaru than than eba huri kuree readers faahaga kolli fadhain

   1. I’m sorry if u feel that way darl.. yes maash gaboolu kuran mi Bai thah avas aruvaalaagenkan geneveny eii mihaaru time nuvaathy.. Insha Allah dhen faharakun ragalhukohlaanan.. thankyou for Ur feedback💜🦋

6. Can u plx just check dhelolun story lumuge kurin.. Hus kuh bas.. aadha aa hilaafu etha kameh.. boa govaane meeheh

   1. Will keep that in mind next time.. thankyou for Ur feedback💜🦋

   2. I was goin to saythe same thing…Ehen authors ah hate kuraa meeheh mi.. Darkqueen story ah ves maash fake comment koffa othi amilla story ah kuraahn

   3. I don’t hate on other authors.. I even read ehen authors ge story thah.. I said it before and I said it again I never fake comment in any story.. this id ga maash comment kuriyas kurany.. that author story liyegen ulhun iru exam dhuvaskolhu v ma I didn’t even check esfiya.. please ehen meehunge boluga dhogu thuhumathu elhuvun huttaala

7. I’m deleting rashu soruge comments hadi ehchehi Kiya vhk aa evvex gulhumeh noanna comments kuraathy.. argument eh viyya fashan haadha beynun vey rashu soru🤦🏻‍♀️ please don’t make this comment section an argument and be respectful towards eachother.. at least insaanakah v thi kuran jehey respect kohla💜💜

8. Mi part vx v v v reethi MA!!!
   curiosity waiting for next part!!
   When is next??

   1. Maash,you can do this batter…vaahaka liyaa iru thankolheh laslahun,visnaigen liyuneema ok vaane…i don’t hate you like others pls echeh hee nukurachey..n I also know u don’t do fake comments 😭…I am just telling u what you did wrong…
      Ly maash!!

   2. Urrr Name is That

   3. Thankyou dear.. I’m happy U liked it💜🦋

   4. Thankyou for Ur feedback dear.. yes I’ll try to do better than this in the future.. thankyou for sharing Ur opinion and telling me what to correct.. love you more darl💜🦋

9. Yes,I thikamaa bahay gothun evves echeh nubunaanan💜
   Aslu vx readers v rude koh vaahaka dhekkee…
   Maash ah vx adhi rangalhu kirevayne !!
   U can do this!!

   Readers,pls pls pls keep some respect for her…Thi huri haa echeh kiyaa iru vx she didn’t say anything u guys don’t want to hear..so pls keep some respect…thank you !!!💜

   1. U are right!!

   2. Thankyou Rai.. Insha allah will do better💜🦋

10. Loved this part so much💗
    Aslu maash thikuraa hih varah saabas!
    ehaa busy koh ulhemun ves vhk up kohdheythee vrh ufaa vey!😁
    Rukain ainaa ah hith kee anekka.. He’s so desperate!! aina aa eyna ge athuga hand cuffs alhuvan😂😹
    Azeen bruh🤦don’t he dare hurt her
    When next?
    ly💗💗

    1. Thankyou darll I’m happy U like it.. hehe let’s see what happens dhww.. love you more darl💜🦋

11. Mi vaahakaige mibayah mihaa vareh mi eri sababeh hama nuvisnun! Hama yageenun ves maash hurey ran’galhu kuran masakkaiy koffa! E 2 meehun bidi nattan ulheynee konfadha haaleggabaa!

    1. Shukriyya thiththi.. dhen oii baiga kiyaaleema engeyne emeehun bidi vattaalan ulhey haaleh💜🦋

12. Are u from Huvadhu Atoll island or from North Atoll island ?Dude 😎

    1. Thi suvaal7 kuraanee kaakaa?!?
       Kiyuntherin tha?!?
       or maash ?!?

    2. Aslaam Alaikum 🥀🖤🖤🖤
       I joined as a Reader in this site since Last Year ,But Vrh Vrh fahaaga kohlevey kameh Author’s stories ga eba hureyyy Aslu Vrh hurt vaa Kahala comments…I feel ecomments thah kiyaafa Very sad… Actually Mi dhuvas kolhu Miee Holidays So Yrhhh Authors ves rest beynunvaane I totally understand!!! Dhen ,Baeh faharu Huredhaane kithamme Talent people’s ves aslu ga hunaane dhw mistakes….It means No one in this world is better.. It’s a true asluga…Dhen ,Maash ge stories akeyy hama Vrh Vrh mi site ga popular Vrh hihgaimu Descriptions ves hama emme furihama stories thakuga himeney stories…So She’s so talentive.. MaashaAllah 🖤🥀So ,Kudakudha mistakes including Reader’s Negative comments in it would make her feel Heartbroken 💔or upset I ReaLly don’t know how to say That… Inshallah🖤🥀 You guys respect her…She not just write stories…We even doesn’t know the life she spent a day…I wish You all will get a good information,epically Authors & Readers 🖤🖤🖤

    3. Thankyou darl.. I’m happy U understand.. I’m happy U like my stories.. actually even if it’s school holidays I’m not free cause I still have to go to job.. and I’m a bit stressed lately.. ig that’s why there are many mistakes in my writing.. I’m thinking of taking a break and uploading the story after I finish writing it💜🦋

    4. Who u

    5. I can’t answer that question in public sorry

    6. Thi Kon mishh eh

13. Why do you wanna know ?!?

    1. ^cuxx You said that Actually it’s not for The readers only to Autor^With respect

14. ލޮތްބެއް ނޫން. ލޯތްބެއް
    މާޝް ވަރަށް ރަނގަޅު ކުރަން އެބަ ޖެހޭ
    އަޅުގަނޑުމެންނަށް މާ ރަނގަޅު މާޝް ޗެކްކޮށްފަ ރަނގަޅަށް ލިޔެފަ އަޕްލޯޑު ކުރިޔަސް އޭރުން މިހާރު ފަދަ ކުށްތައް މަދުވެ ކިޔުންތެރިންނަށް ކިޔަން ފަސޭހަ ވާނެ އަދި ވާހަކަ އާއި މާޝްއާ ދޭތެރޭ ހިތްހަމަޖެހޭނެ

    1. މިހާރު ކިޔުންތެރިން ހިތްހަމަނުޖެހެނީ ކީއްވެގެން ކަން ވެސް އެބަ އިނގޭ ދެއްތޯ. އަޅުގަނޑަށް ވެސް ކުރީ ބައި ތަކުން ފާހަގަ ކުރެވުނު މާޝް ވާހަކަ ދައްކަނީ ކިޔުންތެރިންނާ ވާހަކަ ދައްކަން ޖެހޭ އެންމެ ރީތި ގޮތަކަށް ނޫން ކަން.. އެކަމަކު މާޝްއަށް ހުތުރުކޮށް ވާހަކަ ދެއްކި މީހުން އެ ކުރީ ރަނގަޅު ކަމެކޭ ވެސް ނުބުނާނަން.. މިއީ ވާހަކަ ކިޔަން ހާއްސަ ސައިޓެއް. ކަމުނުދަންޏާ ވާހަކަ ނުކިޔާ ދޫކޮށްލުމުގެ އިޚްތިޔާރު ހުރިހާ ފަރާތްތަކަށް ވެސް އޮވޭ. އެހެންވެ އަޅުގަނޑުގެ ވެސް އެދުމަކީ ހުރިހާ ބޭފުޅުން އެކަކު އަނެކަކަށް އިހްތިރާމް ކުރުން އަދި އެންމެ ރީތި ގޮތުގައި ވާހަކަ ދެއްކުން.. މާޝް ވެސް ކިޔުންތެރިން ވެސް. މާޝް ކުރިމަގުގަ ރަނގަޅު ކުރާނެ ކަމަށް އުންމީދު ކުރަން.. ޕޮޓެންޝަލް ހުރި ކުއްޖެއް ތީ. މި ސައިޓް ގައި ގުނާލެވޭ ވަރުގެ ލިޔުންތެރިއަކަށް ވެވިދާނެ. ކުރިން އުޅޭ އިފޫ ރީން ލިއާޝާ ޔޫން ޝައި ޝީޒް ހިމީ މެން ފަދަ ލިޔުންތެރިއަކަށް ވެވޭނެ އިރާދަކުރެއްވިއްޔާ. އުންމީދު ކަނޑާނުލާ ކުރިއަށް ދިޔުމަކީ އަޅުގަނޑުމެން އެދޭ ގޮތް

    2. Labba mihaaru ingijje kiyuntherin hiyhama nujehunu sababu.. Insha Allah kuriah oii tha ragalhukuran masaikai kuraanan.. maasha vrh bodah maafah edhen evves kiyuntheri aka hadikoh vhk dhehkifa othiyya.. maash ge ummeedhaky comment section vhk ah ihthiraam aa eku hiyaalu faalhu kura thanakah hedhun.. Insha Allah iraadha kurehviyya ragalhu kuran masaikai kuraanan.. 💜🦋

    3. Insha allah kuriah oii Bai thakuga ragalhu kohlaanan..

15. V bodu thedeh..
    Mee vaahaka vaahaka kiyan onna site eh …huthuru bahun vaahaka dhakkaakah noon.. maash vaahaka dhekkee kiyuntherinnah huthuru kosheh noon.ekam emme baynun vaa gothakah vx noon..of coz evves meehskasheh 100 % emmen baynun vaahaka gothakasheh vaahaka nudhekkayne..ekan alhugandu gaboolu kuran… Ekam kiyuntherinnah huree v huthuru bahun vaahaka dhekevifa(baeh kiyuntherin)
    Vaahaka hadheeya vaahaka nukiyaanee… maash ge haters ah mi site ga dhen huri hurihaa vaahaka eh kamudheytha?!?
    Keehve ehen authors ah thihen huthuru bahun vaahaka nudhakkanee?!
    E authors vakin inxaareh dheefatha onnanee e miihunge vaahaka ah echeh kiyaigen nuvaaneey kiyaafa?!?

    Alhugandah varah bodah huree faahaga kurevifa @maash and @darkqueen ah huthuru bahun vaahaka dhakkaakan
    Pls stop..e meehunge vx hitheh onnaane ey haters!!!!kiyan baynun nuvannaa nukiyaa!!
    And alhugandah varah bodah huree faahaga kurevifaMAASH EY KIYAIGEN DHOGU VAAHAKA THAH EHEN MEEHUN LIYAA VAAHAKA THAKUGE COMMENTS GA LIYAAKAN
    misaalakan Ara,Yoon ge vaahaka THAKUGE comments ga….pls stop that ..it will hurt others hearts too …
    For the last thing, comments kuraairu pls pls MIND YOUR LANGUAGE ..ik mi vaahaka dhekkuneevx emmen baynun vaa gothakah noon kan…ehen kamah vejjeyaa v v sorry 😔

    MAASH,YOU ARE DOING A GREAT JOB!!!

    KEEP IT UP!! 💝

    1. Maash maafah edhen kiyuntherinna hadikoh vhk dhehkifa othiyya.. thanks for understanding dear💜🦋

16. Vrh Gina dhuvas kollaafa mi comment kollani anekka. Gavaaidhun vhk Kiyan igey comment nukuriyas😊 I don’t get why there is so many hates . Anyways I love this story. Mi ep vx vrh salhi hama 💯this is actually one of the best stories aslu
    Maash u are my fav 🫶🏽
    I’ll always support u
    Love u 🫶🏽🫶🏽

    1. Thanks a lot Maryam.. vrh ufaavejje dhuvasgadakah fahun maryamge comment eh libuneema.. vrh ufaavejje vhk reethikan enguneema.. aww thank you so much for Ur kind words.. love you more darl💜🦋

17. This part was very pretty 🤍😊
    Curiously waiting for the next part 😊

    1. Thankyou girl.. I’m happy U liked it.. 💜🦋

18. When next???? 😊❤

    1. Soon Insha allah💜🦋

19. Varah reethi mi part ves keep writing waiting for next part

    1. Thankyou darkqueen.. I’m happy u liked it. 💜🦋

20. Hey maash 🦋
    How are you ??? Are you ok????
    Story hama vv reethi…. It’s amazing
    Don’t think too much …. Anyone can make mistakes…. I read stories from other dhivehi websites as well as international reading platforms…. Even the best authors there also make mistakes when writing….
    Mistakes aren’t bad then make you realise that you are not perfect and you don’t even need to be perfect …. It reminds you you are a human being 😊
    And about the mistakes…. Now you know it so you should try to improve it…. That’s how life works
    Anyways…. WHAT did rukain do ??? I mean it’s unbelievable 🤣🤣🤣🤣… I was shocked and in trauma 😳 poor aina 😂
    When is next???
    Curiously waiting
    Take care sissy 💜
    Lot of love 💕
    Bye

    1. Hey shimmer
       I’m fine alhamdhulillah..
       Thankyou so much.. vrh ufaa vejje story reethikan enguneema.. mistakes happen in everyones lives.. its best not to repeat it..
       hehe rukain ulheyny ehen dhen.. lets see what happens dhw.. next part libeyny dhen story liye nimuneema.. Take care darl.. love you more💜🦋

21. Actually why is rashu soru having beef with you? Personal or..

    1. I don’t think i know him/her..

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