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1. Varah kada 🙄🙄🙄

   1. Then, can you suggest some ideas to improve?
      Thank you

2. The cover pic gurl looks like a maid

   1. What matters is what happens in the story, not how the cover looks.

   2. dont judge a book by its cover

3. vrh kada darkqueen.. kudhin evarah suggest kureema vess name change nukoh thi genessdheny.. kudhin suggest kohdhin hama loabi names vess.. rangalhu kollaa darkqueen.. take this positively pls

   1. In sha allah i will try to use them in other stories.
      Thank you

   2. varugadha name eh dhw mi dhen maash kiya meehun amilla name change kuran ves feney mi site ga

4. Yuh a lot of readers asked you to change the name but you won’t
   Aa thi manna mee dark queen hama gothuga hifahattaanee my foot

   1. There are many stories with the same names on this website.
      So go check other authors and their stories.
      Then come and criticize mine.

   2. maybe you should change ur name to maireen too i think you really like the name

5. Ik that!
   But the thing is enme gina readers ge fav authors ge current stories ga ulhey characters ge name dhineema!
   And when somebody asks you to change the names you can’t even do that!🙄🙄🙄🙄

6. I believe every writer has their own story own identity unique to others . Dont mind these peeps keep up the story darkqueen . You go girl vrh rythi mi part

   1. Thank you
      In sha allah part 2 coming soon.

   2. Defending urself from other names I see🤣

7. @Anonymous since you have time to bother me here, how about bothering other authors instead of wasting your time disturbing me?
   Have a good day

   1. Meehaku thedheh buneema hard vejje 😭 no one’s gonna bother authors who isn’t a fake like copying others work and stuff.. criticism mi ah vure gina vaane dark Queen, dark queen ge gothuga hifattagen hunnanya..

   2. i dont think she copied this bruh. its her book. let her name it.

8. i dont even read vhk but this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooood

   1. pls part 2. plssss

   2. Thank you.
      Hope you will like the next part too.
      Coming soon In sha allah.
      Stay tuned

9. dont mind what others say. the name does not matter. its the story. and for me the story was out of this WOOoOOOOOORRRLLLlllLlLDDDDdddDD.

   1. In sha Allah, more surprises are coming in the upcoming parts.
      Stay tuned.

10. Duhh.. What is the problem of using the same name. Mihaaru maash liyaa storyge lead dhen innaanee maireen n kail eh noon. So mi storyga lead ah maireen ineema what is the problem??? I dont understand these people.. E story ge side character eh mi storyga.. And look at the difference between the plots of these 2 stories. Im shocked.. I really dont get it. And darkqueen ah bunelaanee mi story, mi prt vrh reethi MA. Next prt thankolhey dhigu kon genesdhyfiyya vrh happy vaane. Curiously waitingg.. When next prt??? Tc.. Lyy🖤🖤

    1. exactly

    2. In sha allah next part releasing this week hopefully stay tuned

11. And readers who say that she is copying. Can you show me the evidence please. Then i will decide to go on which side.

    1. she did not.

12. Still mihaaru continue kuraa story akun name negeyma massala akah vany.. she could’ve used ehen names.. readers dhinvxme ehen names but she didn’t change..

    1. is it your story?

    2. is maash the moderator of esfiya if im writing story guess ill have to check in with maash to make sure i dont use the same name as hers

    3. its just a name

13. Laara ge story is a copy.. check laara ge story and her previous one

    1. whos laara now

14. It’s maash ge story I’m a loyal fan of hers

    1. Then go bother her.
       Why u still here?
       Btw, who are you?
       Anyway, thank you for your criticisms.
       Keep going, I don’t back down easily

    2. yeah it shows this aint tuff bro

    3. more like lil bro is loyal to a fictional character called maireen

    4. then go read maashs story lil bro. if u love her that much. no one wants u here. no one asked u to be here.

15. why are people getting so bothered by using maireen name as the mc in this story just cuz maash used this name it doesnt mean she owns this name yall acting immature and it shows if maash doesnt care why do you guys care honestly i want to here this maash ge opinion on this did she send you guys here to comment cuz why are so many people getting triggered by a name

16. instead of saying maama avahaarav there i think it would have been better to use niyaavi cuz avaaharavun is the emme maaih way of saying niyaavun and most commonly used for important people

    1. Thanks i will keep on improving my writing skills thank you

17. its the way i dont see this much outrage in stories where someone is completely copying another but suddenly when a author uses a same name as another author everybody is getting triggered

    1. fr

18. Plus when the readers asked politely to change the name n have a lot of name but still you won’t change !
    Adhi huregen eba kiya ennu go disturb other authors ey! despicable!! Ehen authors ah disturb koh criticize kurumah vure emeehun rangalhey. Pis pis!
    Darqueen my foot🙄

    1. Amillayah dho mithanah thi ais undhagoo kurani.
       So i was kindly saying theres nothing wrong with bothering others too.

    2. lil bro u DO NOT sound tuff

    3. nobody wants ur stinky foot lil bro

19. No one is going to war.. this is getting out of hand now.. ISTG.. The name MAIREEN is not a name thats owned by maashh.. ekamaku two maashaa eh ehfaharaa two names use kuran v ma olhun bolhun araanethyve readers ehn e bunany.. readers furathama ehchehives nukiya reethikh buni and gave her suggestions also.. but she turned a blind eye on them.. she frkn asked “can u suggest some unique names with letter m” and ignored what readers asked for.. @darkqueen boa haru viyass thidhen bodu varu.. mieekee gaboolu kureveyne kahala vaahaka thakeh noon.. first you took the name Raizel shihaa abadhuvey hithugaa magey liyun dhuvass kolhu.. you could have took the name after she was done.. and she is writing a s2 for the story too! and now your doing the same by taking maash ge story in Maireen! No one will say anything if you take the name from someones finished story.. no one would say anything! Alhe mibuny dhogeh thoa balan famous author eh ninmmaafa in story akun name eh nagaabala kaalu keekeytho kiyany balailan alhe.. alhe lets see what happens..
    Evves namaky ehh evves author own kuraa nameh noon! Reader eh noonassvess! Ehn nama dhuniyeyga eh nameh kiyaa ehaa meehuneh noolheyne thaa dhw🤷🏻‍♀️ mikan huhttaa dhen istg..

    1. Gud point

    2. Saabahey kalo! Seedhaa ehvanai ge vaahaka eh thi bunee!

20. HI all readers.
    I will still be continuing this story with the same plot.
    Choose the name that you would like.
    1) Mayaari.
    2) Malsa
    3) Laaya.

    1. Laaya

    2. laaya

    3. Laaya…Reethi Name eh I’m telling ingey
       Hoonain

21. Tbh thihaa disrespectful koh ulhefa theena ge story eh kiyaa meeheh vaane hen hiyeh nuvey🙄🙄

    1. its only u man. mithibee hus meehun darkqueen ge story kiyan

22. Guyzzz stop the conflict plss or else I will call the police and inform that

23. N what will the police do😹😹 kid kid joke won’t stop me😂😂

    1. get a life lil bro. if u dont like her vaahaka then just go read something else. it aint that deep lil bro

    2. bro does nothing except criticize books for names ig

    3. id like to see him write a vaahaka. i dont think bro knows haa shaviyani.

    4. what is that name “EH??”. what are u confused bout. cant read a story

    5. lil bro can go cry.

    6. rememmber i aint bullyin no one. just giving you your own medicine

24. @idk , @dark queen no.1 frfr thiee darkqueen tha??? it is getting questionable now 🤣

25. She should be named copyqueen not dark queen lol🤣

    1. You should Name Anonymous Name neygey Ididot

26. Aa then alhe fahe dark queen disrespectful ey buneema then log In nuve jehunuhaa meeheh ge nan liyaafa comment kurane???
    N btw I akah neygigeneh noolhemey haa eh shaviyanieh??
    @dark queen no.1 fan frfr ah kanne neygeynee cuz bunefi ennu “him” ey. So FYKI I’m just a girl!! ingijje dhw varah😂😂😂lmfao

27. Idk thaan vee kanne roalan! I’m just way too fine🙄

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