ތީ ފުރާނައިގެ ދިރުމޭ މަގޭ (4)

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1. hey guyxx……. here is the nxt prt….
   n i jxt wanted to tell u guyxx tht immy ah vaahaka up kurn las v ma kiyuntheringe faraathun nihaayathah maafah edhennn…. 🙁 🙁 hpe u will all lyk itt….. n thnx fr ur support…. 🙂 🙂 😀 🙂 :D:D:D:D

2. Next part kn irakun?? Miyah vure dhigu kohla dheythi dhn faharakun if possible.. Anyways the story is nice.. Keep it up..

   1. thnxx miloo…… vrh avahah nxt prt vx up kolladheynan….
      🙂 🙂 yahh… n balaanan nxt prt miah vure dhigu koh up kolleveythw……. 😀 😀 😀 😀

3. Nice

   1. thnx sanmu

4. Vrh reethi….when is the next part????

   1. thnx maalu… vrh avahah nxt prt vx up kolladheynan…..

5. nice too short n nxt prt avaha up kodheythi plx

   1. thnxx mice…

6. Immy .. varah bodah sorry ingey.. dhogunuhadhaa varah thedhah mibunanee… immyge vahaka keema leymahchah dhanee rulhi aisgen hadi huthuru kamun mivahaka. Genesdheyn ulheygoi ok .ekamaku thihira ibaaraai kurumeh.. pis pis.. Eh jumulain buneveyne vahaka thin hatharu jumulain bunedheefa huhnaathee heevaneee varah udhagulun liyaahen. Bolah udhagoo vanee hama huvaa ehme peragraph eh keegothah mulhin foohi vejje. Hope kuran liyumuge fenvaru ragalhu kuraane kamah. No offence.. immy bunamehnu mistakes kiyaadheyshey ehenve bunelee… All the best in ur future ????????????

   1. Thi ah vure reethi koh buneveyne ehnu :/ story aslu v reethi! ekam mistakes thankolheh ginae. Immy you can do well :*

   2. yahh thnxx lol…. fr tellin me my mistakes…. n thnxx fr readin….

   3. thnxx alt maukz….. 🙂 😀 😀

7. Ahchaaheyyy…

   1. hhhaaa….. thnxx nuhnu……

8. i feel really odd to read this story…i mean how u hav arranged the paragraphs…n most importantly sometimes i het confused wen u write ” eynaa” all over the story…it makes me feel like talking about another person…u cn do much better dan this…good luck?

   1. thnxx ken…. ill try to improve tht….

9. awwww immy vrh salhi ingey mi prt… jxt luv it.. omg maEshan n rauhaa.. noo.. dhn rysh haadha dhera vaaney… bt eyna haadha rangalhey. sacrifice khly her luv fr her bff.. jxt woww immy.. miss u ingey.. 😉 tc.. n i lyk the idea mi stryge.. sacrificin the luv fr hr bff. <3 😉 gud luck dear. 😉

   1. Yaa dhw.. thats called true friends.. but Reesha varah dhera vaane aslu vx. ekamaku Rauha akah neynge ehnu Reesha MaEshan dheke lwbi vaa kameh.. 😮 i hope there will be a happy ending! Good luck Immy! 😀 😉

   2. awwnn thnxx…. ryyynnnnnn……. m missin u alttttttttt….. yahh dhww… she sacrifised her luv fr her bff…. n thnxx fr ur supportt…. tgc of ur selff… 😉 😉 :P:P:P:P 😀 😀 😀

   3. thnxx fxooo…. fr readin n fr givin mee so muchhh supprt……. 😀 😀 😀

10. Story nice but maa kuree

    1. thnxx sadhaaa….. bbt really???? hma maa kurutha stry… ekm immy hithun stry vrh dhigu koggen meenee… hehe…. anywayxx thnxx n ill try to make da nxt prt loooooonnnnnnngggggggg……… 😉 😉

11. Eynaa eynaa eynaa eynaaa hinakamun kiyahwex fooohi

12. Eynaa eynaa eynaa eynaaa ginakamun kiyahwex fooohi

    1. ehnthw liu……. ill try to improve tht n thnxx fr tellin my mstke…

13. Miwaahaka kiyaahitheh nuwey vvvvvvvv hadi

    1. okk…

14. Immy mulhi story ga eyna liyefa otheema varah undhagoo kiyan 🙁 varah confuse vey egothah liyuneema hope u will correct it 😉 😉 😀

    1. yahh… thnxx fr tellin ira ill imprve tht in nxt prt..

15. :O 😀 :S

16. E dhogeh Immy. E gothah dhethin neehaku bunelaa ehchakun vaahaka ah evves badhaleh nugennaathi. V Reethi Immy vaahaka genesdhey goiyy. Adhives eh jumla ah hedhen hunna thankolhu kolhu 5 noonee 6 jumla ah hadhaalaa. For an Example: “Eynaa Rauhaa Ahttaka eve.” “E kohdhin kanthakeve.” “Adhives Kudaee heyyeve.”
    “Aeneh dhuvaheve.” “Ebbai meehunneve.” “Ufaaverikan Dhemunneve.”
    ?????

    1. thnxx fr givin me soo much supprt n bein my fan…. n ill try to improve thse mistkes…..

17. Oh please immy mi koacheh??? …
    Reeshaa 4n negieve. Eyna roanfeshieve. Eynage Lolun Karuna feybieve. Eyna Karuna fohelieve. Eyna Rui sababuthoa eve??? Eyna ruee rauha rulhi aeemaeve….
    ???? include mi scene ves ingey… lol ???? mi ryn aa faxoo aa abadhu haadha rychey kiyaafa comment mikuraneee immy ge mistakes correct kohgen ragalhah liyefaanethy hen heevanee. Ehen noon nama mistakes kiyaidhee ragalhu kuruvaanee dhw.. they are makin a joke out of u immy… u ah realise nuveytha ekan.. emmen Evarah kiyaa iru u shud know dhoa immy liyefa hunnanee hus hama nujehey ehchehi.. hini ahnaneee… ????

    1. thnxx fr tellin me my mstk….
       n immy bunelaanan thi kiyuntheriyaa ah saafu nuve oii kameh…
       ryn immy ge stries gaa reechchey kiyaafa cmnt kurnee jxt to give me supprt… n plxxx they r nt makin a joke out of me…. its nt me who doesnt realix tht…its u who doesnt realix tht….
       n ryn cmnts thakuga immy ge mstkes nubune dhinas ryn immy ah face to fce imy ge mstkes kiyaadhey….
       n fr ur infrmtion i am nt tryin to be rude… i am jxt tellin u sumthin u didnt undrstnd….
       n plxx jessumah immy ge emme bodu fan ey kiyaafa nam liyuneema u r the one who is bein rude nt me…
       n thnxx fr readin…

18. E dhogeh Immy. Meehun ehn bunelaa ehchakun vaahaka genesdhey goiy badhalu nukuraane kamah Ummeedh kuran.
    V hiyy hama jehey genesdhey goiyyy. Adhives eh jumlain genesdheves e hunna jumla than 5 nooney 6 jumla ah hadhaaleema varah furihama vaane. For an Example: “Reeshaa Eve.” “Hama eve.” “Ran’galhahves bedhijje eve.” “Eynaa Fahaiy balaalieve.” “Bodu gahekeve.” Mi kahala gothakah ????

    1. Immy … haadha majA vahaka eh meee

    2. thnxx

    3. thnxx anonymous fr readin n tellin my mstk

19. C rioxly immy….. mee meehun vahaka liyaa goitha? ??? heevaneee kuda kujjaku vahaka liyan dhas kuraahen.. ekkoh dhas veema mi site ah vahaka liyanfashan veenu… mi vahaka kiyaafa migey ehmen heneee… heveyne dhoa mihaa majaa koh liyefa otheeema ??? immy aa hedhi meega huhna ehen vahaka thah kiyaa hiy ves kendey eba.. kihineh liyefa mi hureee ????

    1. thnxx alt…. hama same person eh ge faraathun immy ah mihaa gina seperate negetive cmnts libuneema immy ah vrh gellun vey….. n so plxxx fr god sake bunan beynun vaa ehcheh hama emme cmnt eh gaa liyeba seperate cmts ge gothugaa nuliye…
       plxxxxx… fr god sake….

20. vvvvvvv rythi stiry eh keep it up

    1. thnx alt mmm….

21. immy stry v v v v v v salhi ingey .. just some mistake ebahuri .. e than thn kolhu rangalhu kohlanikoh hama perfect vaane mi stry .. v rythi ingey .. hithah araa dhn kihineh baaey vaany .. gud luck immy .. keep it up .. 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. aawwn thnxx laii…….
       dhn anna prt vrh interestin lai kahala kudhinnah…. hehe..
       n thnx again laii 🙂 🙂

22. What is this?? Is this a story?? Please guys don’t lie. How can it be nice and awesome? It really … Don’t
    know what to say. Its like your a kid. Please go and read few stories and then come and write. Bcs its really awkward
    Its so babish. No offence but still every writer must have a talent. Sorry to say but you dont have. Hama gaimuves adhieh neiyy.
    So please improve it. Eyna Eyna Eyna?? Who is Eyna? Sentence hama eh nujehey.and please if you don’t know to write plzz don’t write….shmae on you :/

    1. esfiya.com ge magsadhakee dhivehi bahah loabi jessumaai dhivehi liyuntherikan kurieruvumaai, aa liyuntherin ufehdhun kamugai vee iru, “on your face” ge comment gai vaa “please if you don’t know to write plzz don’t write….shmae on you” fadha comment thakakee esfiyaige magsadhaa mulhin araarun vaa fadha comment eh kamugai dheken.

    2. k thnxx fr tllin….
       ill try to improve tht…..

23. Nice keep it up

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