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މި ވާވަރު ބުނެދޭހިތްވޭ…ޓްރެއިލަރ

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March 22, 2025 2 Mins Read
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ސްކޫލް ދައުރުން ފެށިވެންވެސް އަބްޔަންގެ ހިތުގައި ޔަލްވީގެ ނަން ވަނީ ފެވިފައެވެ.  ނަމަވެސް،އޭރު ޔަލްވީގެ ހިތުގައި ވަނީ ޝަޔާލްގެ ސޫރަ ބިންވަޅު ނެނގިފައެވެ.އަބްޔަން އަަށް ޝަޔާލްގެ ހަޤީޤަތް އެނގުމުން ޔަލްވީއަށް ވިސްނައިދޭން އަބްޔަން މަސައްކަތްކުރެއެވެ.އެހެނަސް، އެކަން ވަނީ ފޫނެއް ފަޔަށް ފެންފުރުން ފަދަ ކަމަކަށެވެ.ޔަލްވީ ކުރިމައްޗަށް ހިތި ހަޤީޤަތް ފާޅުވުމުން އަބްޔަންއާއި ޔަލްވީއާ ދެމެދު ރޭނިފައިވާ ފާރު ފުޑުފުޑު ވެއެވެ.ނަމަވެސް އޭގެ އަހަރުތަކެއް ފަހުން އެ ދެމެދުގައި އަނެއްކާވެސް ބޯމިން ނޭނގޭ އުސް ފާރެއް ލެވެނީ  ފަރުދާގެ ފުރަގަަހުއި އަބްޔަންއާއި ޔަލްވީ ދުރުކުރަން، ޝަޔާލްއާއި މަލްހާ ކުޅެެމުން ދާ ކުޅިގަން ނޭނގޭ ހާލުގައެވެ.

ސްކޫލް ދައުރުގައި ވެވުނު ލޯބި އިލްޔާއަށް ވެގެން ދަނީ ޒަހަރަށް ވުރެ ހިތި އެއްޗަކަށެވެ. ޔާނިއުގެ ހަޤީޤަތް ކަޝްފުވެގެން ދިއުމުން އިލްޔާގެ ހިތުގައި އުތުރި އަރަމުން ދިޔަ އިޙްސާސްތައް ކަފުން ކުރަން މަސައްކަތްކުރެއެވެ.އެހެނަސް، އިލްޔާ އަށް އެއިޙްސާސްތައް ކަފުންކުރުމަށް ނުކުޅެދެއެވެ.ދެމީހުންގެ ދެމެދުގަަައި އޮތް ގުޅުން ހީނަރުވުމުން ޔާނިއު އަށް އުނދަގޫ ވެއެވެ.އިލްޔާއާ ދޭތެރޭ ދެކެމުން އައި ނަޒަރު ތަފާތުވުމުން ޔާނިއު ގެ ހިތުގައި އުފެދެމުންދާ އިހްސާސްތަކަކީ ލޯބި ކަމަށް ޔާނިއުއަށް ގަބޫލް ކުރަން މަޖުބޫރުވެއެވެ.އެހިތުގައިވާ ފުން ލޯބި ފާޅުކުރަން ޖެހިލުންވަނީ އޭޭނާާއަށް ކުރިން އުޅެވުނު ގޮތް ހިތަށް އެރުމުންނެވެ.އެހެނަސް، އެހިތުގައި އިލްޔާއަށްޓަކައި ވިންދު ޖަހަމުން ދިޔަ ލޯބި އެއަށް ވުރެ މާވަރުގަދައެވެ.އިލްޔާގެ ރުހުން ހޯދުން ވެގެން ދަަނީ ޔާނިއު އަށް ވަރަށް އުނދަގޫ ކަމަކަށެވެ.

ފުރާވަރުގައި މަޔާންއާއި އިބާގެ ހިތުގައި ލޯތްބޭ މިކިޔާ އިޙްސާސް އުފެދެނީ އެންމެ ނަފަރަތުކުރާ ފަރާތައްޓަކައެވެ.ނަމަވެސް އެންމެ ނަފްރަތު ކުރާ ފަރާތަށް ހިތް ލެނބިދާނެ ކަމަށް ގަބޫލެއްނުކުރެއެވެ.މިކަމުގެ ސަބަބުން މިދެ ޒުވާން ހިތް ޒަޚަމް ވެއެވެ.އެހެނަސް މަޔާންއަށް އޭނާގެ އިޙްސާސްތައް ކޮންޓްރޯލް ކުރުންވީ ދަތިކަމަކަށެވެ.ވަރަށް ފޮނި އުންމީދުތަކާއެކު މަޔާންގެ ހިތުގައިވާ ލޯބި އިބާއަށް ފާޅުކުރެއެވެ.އެތައް ހުވަފެން ތަކެއް ދެކެމުންނެވެ. ބުނޭނޫންހެއެޔެވެ. ހުވަފެނަކީ ބިލާހެކެވެ.ނަމަވެސް، މަޔާން ދެކެމުން ދިޔެ ހުވަފެންތަކާއި ކުރަމުން ދިޔަ އުންމީދުތައް ވިއްސިވިހާލި ވެގެން ދެއެވެެ.އެ ޒުވާން ހިތް ފޮތިފޮތި ކުރަމުންނެވެ.މި މަންޒަރު ބަލަމުން ދާއިރު އިބާގެ ހިތްވެސް ވަނީ އެފަދަ ޙާލަތެއްގައެވެ. އިިބާގެ ހިތުގައި އުފެދެމުންދާ އިޙްސާސްތައް ބޭރުކުރުން ވެގެން ދަނީ ވަރަށްވެސް ނުރައްކާތެރި ކަމެކެވެ.

 

އުފަލާއި މަޖަލުގައި އުޅެމުން ދިޔެ މި ހަ ޒުވާނުންގެ ދިރިއުޅުމަށް ވަރުގަދަ ޒަލްޒަލާއެއް އަންނަނީ ލޯތްބޭމިކިޔާ އިޙްސާސްގެ ސަބަބުންނެވެ.އަބްޔަންއަށް ޔަލްވީގެ ލޯބި ލިބޭނެހެއްޔެވެ؟އަބްޔަންއާއި ޔަލްވީ ދުރުކުރަން ޝަޔާލްއާއި މަލްހާ ކުރަނީ ކީއްހެއްޔެވެ؟އަބްޔަންއަށް އެއިނގެނީ ކޮން ހަޤީޤަތެއްބާއެވެ؟އިލްޔާއަށް އެއިނގެނީ ޔާނިއުގެ ކޮން ހަޤީޤަތެއް ހެއްޔެވެ؟އިލްޔާއާއި ޔާނިއުގެ ލޯބީގެ ވާހަކަ ނިމޭނީ ކިިހިނަކުން ހެއްޔެވެ؟އިބާ އެންމެނަށް ފޮރުވަނީ ކޮން ހަޤީޤަތެއް ހެއްޔެވެ؟މަޔާންއަށް އިބާގެ ލޯބި ކާމިޔާބު ކުރެވޭނެ ހެއްޔެވެ؟

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މިއޮތީ އަޅުގަނޑު ލިޔަން ފަށާފައިވާ ވާހަކަ”މި ވާވަރު ބުނެދޭހިތްވޭ”ގެ ޓްރެއިލަރ…އިންޝާﷲ ވަރަށް އަވަހަށް މި ވާހަކައިގެ ފުރަތަމަ ބަޔާއެކު ހުރިހާ ކިޔުންތެރިންނާ ބައްދަލް ކޮށްލާނަން…ހުރިހާ ކިޔުންތެރިންނަށްވެސް ޓްރެއިލަރ ކަމުދާނެ ކަމަށް އުންމީދުކުރަން…☺

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  1. hihi says:
    March 22, 2025 at 12:56 pm

    Vara boda Naya ge writing style copy kofa huri hen heeve eba, anekka heevaa gothe baa?

    1. Anonymous says:
      March 22, 2025 at 1:04 pm

      Yes that’s right

    2. jskjsk says:
      March 22, 2025 at 1:24 pm

      omg same i felt like that in the “shahusiyathu thakuge thaaraf” thingy too. but maybe shes just taking inspiration. ehenvx vedhaane

  2. Cute girl says:
    March 22, 2025 at 1:35 pm

    Here’s a longer and more expressive compliment for Aana:

    “Aana, I can’t even begin to describe how much I love your work—it’s genuinely something special. From the moment I started reading, I was completely drawn in by the way you weave your words together so effortlessly. Your storytelling has a unique charm that makes every scene feel vivid and alive, as if I’m right there experiencing everything alongside the characters. The depth you give to each character is truly remarkable—they feel so real, with their emotions and personalities shining through in every interaction. I find myself getting attached to them, feeling their joys, their struggles, and everything in between. The way you build your world is equally impressive; every detail feels intentional and adds an extra layer of richness to the story. What makes your writing stand out even more is the heart you pour into it—it’s clear that every word is crafted with care and passion. Your ability to balance emotion, tension, and those quiet, meaningful moments is simply beautiful. I’ve laughed, felt my heart ache, and held my breath while reading, and that’s a testament to how powerful your writing is. I can’t thank you enough for sharing your talent and creativity with us. Your story has a way of staying with me long after I’ve finished reading, and I’m always eagerly waiting to see where you’ll take us next. Please keep doing what you do—you have a gift, and I’m so grateful to be able to experience it!”

    Let me know if you want it even longer or if there’s something specific you want to highlight!

    1. Sissy says:
      March 22, 2025 at 3:05 pm

      Ai generated comment eh tha mee
      Why would you change your original comments for something others said. Jus be ur self like before gurlll
      Love the trailer btw

    2. Anonymous says:
      March 22, 2025 at 3:55 pm

      I love you for this

  3. aanaa says:
    March 22, 2025 at 1:59 pm

    nooney mi traier ga mihury alhuganduge frnd eh dheefa huri ideas
    alhugandu naya ge vhk thakun copy kohfaeh nun
    ekm alhugandu kiyan baraabarah naya ge vhk thah
    mi vhk ge trailer in thihn heeviyas naya ge vhk r mulhin thafaath vaane
    alhugandu maafah edhn ehvs meeheh liefa vaa vhk r vahtharuhn heeva nama
    kurinvs alhugandu geyga laa vhk liyaa iru hama gendhaa style mii
    alhugandu ehvs meeheh ge vhk eh copy kurumuge hiyaaleh vs nei plus ehvs meeheh vhk liyaa style ah gendhaakah hiyaal kohfaeh noahnaane☺😭
    eii readers ah heeva goi dhn alhugandu balaalaanan naya trailers r shahsiyyathuge tha’araf liyefa huri goi ,mi style ah naya liyefa huriyya alhugandu dhn mi style akah nuliyaanan
    ☺

  4. Anonymous says:
    March 22, 2025 at 2:11 pm

    Hello everyone! Hello Aanaa! It’s Nayaa here
    Just recieved a screenshot of these comments from a friend and decided to drop a comment from me as well. I feel really really bad about these comments. Tbh I feel like Aanaa just took some inspirations because she said she reads my stories and I’ve seen her comments on my stories as well. And I feel like the plot of this story is going to be really different as well.
    Konme liyuntheriyakii ves thafaathu liyuntheri eh.. Liyuntheri kamuga hunnaane hama ehgoiy kanthah thah.. I also take inspiration from other authors and I think that’s completely okay. So let’s all be nice to each other and encourage each other.
    And this trailer is so good Aanaa dear I can’t wait to read this story! Just write according to our style and meehaku ehcheh bunaa irah don’t let go of our ways inge. Let people talk and you just do you girl! I’ll always support you. Good luck darla! Lots and lots of love <3

    1. Nayaa says:
      March 22, 2025 at 2:13 pm

      This is my comment eh btw. Login vefa kureema avahaha submit nuvaanethii login nuve kohlaafa einii, and i forgot to write my name, hehe.

    2. Nayaa says:
      March 22, 2025 at 6:20 pm

      the word “your” is autocorrected to “our” in this comment just wanted to clear that up cuz the mix up of words are mixing up the meaning of the comment 🤍

    3. aanaa says:
      March 23, 2025 at 3:04 am

      thanks nayoo
      lym <3

  5. Cutie girl says:
    March 22, 2025 at 3:41 pm

    Here’s a thoughtful and sincere apology you could send:

    Hey Aana, I just wanted to apologize for writing AI-generated comments on your story. I realize it might have come across as impersonal, and that wasn’t my intention at all. I genuinely enjoy your posts and should’ve taken the time to respond more authentically. I’m really sorry if it seemed lazy or insincere—I’ll make sure to keep it real from now on. Hope we’re good!

    Let me know if you want any tweaks or a different tone!

  6. Cutie girl says:
    March 22, 2025 at 3:51 pm

    Here’s a respectful but firm paragraph addressing the issue:

    Hey Aana, I wanted to talk to you about something that’s been on my mind. I’ve noticed that some of your writing seems very similar to Naaya’s work, and I just wanted to be honest with you about how serious copying or plagiarism can be. When someone puts their heart and effort into creating something original, it’s not fair for their work to be used without proper credit. Beyond that, copying can hurt your own growth as a writer because it takes away the chance to develop your unique voice and ideas. I know you’re capable of amazing things, and I really believe you don’t need to rely on anyone else’s words to shine. If you’re inspired by Naaya, that’s totally okay—but giving credit where it’s due or using their work as motivation to create your own will always be more rewarding. I’m telling you this because I care and believe in your potential, and I know you’re better than this. I hope you understand where I’m coming from, and I’m always here if you want to talk about it.

    Let me know if you want to soften or strengthen the tone or add anything else!

    1. Anonymous says:
      March 22, 2025 at 3:53 pm

      I love this

  7. Eem says:
    March 22, 2025 at 3:52 pm

    Girl stopped her other story to write a story which clearly is a lot inspired by an ongoing story well if it isn’t plagiarism at least acknowledge the author hopefully the plot is different

    1. 👤 says:
      March 22, 2025 at 6:35 pm

      Exactly my point…..liyefa huri style hama seedhaa eggothakah huree…..Idk about the plot but tha phrasing is just the same…..
      Let’s just hope that the plot is difficult dhen

  8. Cutie girl says:
    March 22, 2025 at 3:56 pm

    Hey Aana, I wanted to be honest with you—I started using AI-generated comments on your stories because I was struggling to come up with something new to say each time. I didn’t want to seem repetitive or boring, so I thought using AI might help keep things fresh. I realize now that it might have come across as impersonal, and that wasn’t my intention at all. I genuinely enjoy your stories, and I’ll go back to sharing my own thoughts from now on. Hope you understand!

    1. Anonymous says:
      March 22, 2025 at 4:09 pm

      Cutie girl crash out finally

  9. Ur fav girl says:
    March 22, 2025 at 4:08 pm

    Since naaya ge story is still there and lot of people kiyaafa huri ehenve idea libifa huri kamah vanya ehen mention kollan rangalu waiting for next part ❤️

  10. Cutie gurl says:
    March 22, 2025 at 4:10 pm

    Trailer v reethi masha Allah
    Keep it up
    Curiously waiting for next part

    1. aanaa says:
      March 23, 2025 at 3:05 am

      thanks!!!

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    March 22, 2025 at 4:17 pm

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    1. Pookie says:
      March 22, 2025 at 4:18 pm

      stop bots😐

    2. އިއްޱ says:
      March 22, 2025 at 4:21 pm

      Pookie go touch some grass

  12. AI says:
    March 22, 2025 at 4:27 pm

    Plagiarism is the act of using someone else’s work, ideas, or words without proper acknowledgment and presenting them as your own. It can take many forms, including:
    • Direct plagiarism: Copying someone’s work word-for-word without citation.
    • Self-plagiarism: Reusing your own previous work without permission or acknowledgment.
    • Paraphrasing plagiarism: Rewriting someone else’s work in your own words without crediting the source.
    • Mosaic plagiarism: Mixing copied phrases or ideas with your own writing without proper attribution.
    • Accidental plagiarism: Failing to cite sources correctly due to carelessness or lack of knowledge.

    Plagiarism is considered unethical in academics, journalism, and creative work, and it can lead to serious consequences like loss of credibility, legal action, or academic penalties. Properly citing sources helps avoid plagiarism.

  13. Pariiii_ says:
    March 22, 2025 at 5:09 pm

    guyss, naaya is already fine with her story idea.
    stop demotivating a rising author, its not nice.
    Aanaa, pls don’t take these comments to heart and continue with ur story.
    ik ur writing skills will be astonishing.
    kn irakun furathama part.
    varah inthizaaru kurevey

    1. Lena🤍❤️ says:
      March 22, 2025 at 6:06 pm

      True

    2. Anonymous says:
      March 22, 2025 at 6:08 pm

      Is the rising author in the room with us

    3. aanaa says:
      March 22, 2025 at 9:38 pm

      IA maadhan 1st part submit kohlaanan

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