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1. hi guys hope u will like it

2. V v reethi num one writer

3. Mistakes v Gina..and story ehves reecheh nun….

4. Avasaruvaalaafa nimman ulheyhen heevany

5. Mee konkahala storyeh

6. u knw dont even worry about others bad comments

   but its awesome i like it a lot

7. Oh my god! Mii kn Kahala story eh tha… Heevany lainuganegn ulhey hen.. 1st story ah vee iru thigothah ehchakah ehcheh hadhaafa liunyma Dhn Liya story Kiyan vx readers foohi vaane dho.. So Dhn liya story eh liya iru Vrh vis naign readers Kiya hiyy vaa Kahala gothakah liyaane kamah ummeedhu kuran.. Nd also I hope u wouldn’t take my comment wrong.. I believe u can do better… Wish u success.. 🙂

8. Heyy Lilly! this part is really nice 😉 you can do even better!! you really are inproving… 😀 Goodluck!!

   1. Thanks for your comment
      I was very sad ? for bad comments

9. plx evryone dnt tell lies. i m sure thee kudakudhin noonkan. and kuda kudhinves like nuvaane mi vaahaka ah. 4 god sake lilly vahaka liyaa kudhinnah malaamaaiy nukohbala. kihaa dhera kameh mee? mikahala thaakun thaaku nujehey vaahaka liyanya mi site ah myhun kura ithubaaruves gehleyne.

10. Mi story heevanii summary eh hen
    I mean mii story ehtha?

11. miah kiyany kurierun keep it up

12. Story rythi. Ekamaku Maa avas aruvaalaafa hury. Dhen faharakun rangalhu kohlahchey

13. What is this. Heeveny grade two ga ulhey kudhin frame kura short sentences thakeh hen. Kuda iru liyaa kahala vaahaka ves miavvuren reethi. This looks like a story a third grader wrote on the test paper trying to fit the word limits . vaahaka liyan dhaskoggen liyan feney

14. hey lilly. vrh mistakes eba huri. thiha avas nukohliyas liyaa ehchehi ehn meehunah understand vaane gothah liyeba. good luck

15. Aslu lilly personal koh nunagahchey.. hama asluves avas aruvaalaafa hen vs heevey. Like reader eh buni gothah kuda summary eh kanneyge mee. liyaa gothun heevany thee v age in kudakujjeh hen. Like u dnt have any experience abt feelings in different situations. Sifa vs nukohdhey vaahakaiga ulhey meehun n dhaa than than vs. Laaraa mum ah kiyany shara kan vs amilla ah get vaan mijehuny. Huri kuhthah bunany dherakuraakah noon bt eyrun improve kureveyni. i read all the stories i this site n i knw hw different this on site.

16. Lilly a advise don’t hurry up and try to finish the story go with an flow 🙂 mistakes are there but u can improve u are improving ur story has improved a lot from the first day 🙂 u can achieve a lot 😉 OK so just don’t hurry gd lck…… I will say story Varah reethi only when u stop doing silly mistakes

17. V nice dhn ? MI story

18. V nice story eh kyp it up ?

19. Mi stry ge maigadu reethi.ekamaku vaahaka liyumuge hunaru nei kan faahaga kollan.vaahaka liyaairu ihsaasthah evaahakaiga ulhey meehunge ihsaasthah liyeleema vaahaka reethivaane.sifa kollun thahves madhu kan faahaga kollan. Keep it up.

20. vrh salhi mivaahaka… nd lyk other rdrs said ebahuri small mstks… n maa over vefa othee vx stry….. nd vrh majaa hehehehehe…. oe uh uh kiyaafa tha hodulanee hehehe.. n roshi fihanq hurefa roshi machchah tha hodu lanee……. hahaha. tears came out of my eyes while readung coz its so funny……. i dnt mean its nt gud……… its very gud bt sooooo funnny mr lyk a jokeeee………………….hhhhhhaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaa

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