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1. Hey this is my first story so there might be silly mistakes. Hope you will like it. And leave a comment so i can improve. Thank you ☺

2. v salhi story…..hope to see more of u

3. Thanks smurf ☺

4. Nice story lil sissy❤
   Keep it up?

5. Thanks dhonthi ?
   Love ya ?

6. Mee konehchehtha ehdhuvas fahay 2dhuwas fahay 3dhuwas fahay

7. Nyc story

8. V rah reeti

9. Wow v reethi

10. Vaahaka hadiyyaa hadi vaahaka bunumaky massala eh noon. Kithamme hadiyas liyun theriyaa dheravedhaanethy varah reehchey varah salhi ey wow salhi vaahaka ekey nubune hageegai haama kurumun liyun theriyaa ah ithurah rangalhu kuran furusath libeyne. Vaahaka reehcheh noon. Ekamaku hunaru ebahuri kommes varakah.

11. 1ST story ah balaafa v rangalhu…. ummeedhu kuran reethi vaahaka thekeh mi site ga genesdheynekamah.

12. Ehaa reehcheh noon.

13. Ebunaahen haadha varakah eidhuvas fas…2 dhuvas fas…2 mas fas…1 aharu faa….v undhagooo egothah abdhu liyefa hureema…concept reethi ekam husha alhaidheefa huri goi kamu nudhanee…hope next tym u ll omprove…good luck☺

14. Ok dhen. Ekm u can do better than this.. comments thakuga ebuhuri mistakes faahaga kohffa.. so im not gonna repeat it……..

15. salhi dhen.. hope to c more frm u.. bt improved..;)

16. Nice

17. lavna ah mi vaahaka dhen faadakah salhhi.. FURATHAMA faharaah dhen marhabaa.. furathama vaahka dhen faadakah saalhi.. How older you are? eyru dw aslu hithuga othee reethi thoa noony hadeethoa eegeynee

    1. Thanks lovena☺
       I’m 12yrs old.

18. Thanks all☺
    Dhen miah vuren reethi vahaka eh genesdhevey thw masaiykaiyy kuraanan. In sha allah

19. Lavna ge aslu namakee vex hama lavnaa tha? V salhi nameh Lavna akee.. v unicorn nameh dw.. hehehe
    tis story is perfect

20. OMG… AUTHER nuzha ah vure eh aharu bodu dw….. saalhi vaahaka

21. Yess Shium shifaaz… my real name is Aaishath Lavna Kausar..

22. I wish you will do good next time.

23. lovena…. haadha salhi namekey.. ahannah manma dhinee muskulhi nameh… Faisal…. kada dw nan..
    story is perfect

    1. KAMAKU NUDEY

24. is it a story????

25. KAMAKU NUDEY

26. Ey aslu vex lovena haadha salhi namekey shabee ehvex lovena keeenama dhw 😉 shaihaa v fakka kuda akad 1st vaahaka v ma hama bst… but adhi kuda thafseeleh ainama reethivees…thankolheh kuree… ken faahaga khffa in point shabeee faahaga khllan… 🙂 but shaiha u can do btr than this….. nxt time insha allah improve kuraanekamah ummeedhu kuran…. better luck next time …. 😀

27. Thanks

28. Its amazing…age aa balaafa varah reethi…v interesting..looking more stories of u girl. All the best and good luck little girl ☺
    *hugs*

29. Thanks shaph ?

30. Ibarai tah rangalu kuran feney… “bodu deloo fooduvaalaafai” miahvure rythi koh mi ibaaraai geneveyne.

31. Baeh sukuntakaai ibaaraatuge kudi kudi mahsala huri kamuga viyas idea v reethi. Mustaq baluga liyaairu ekan kan islaah kohlaathi. Vaahaka liyumaky faseyha kameahunun. Mitaaga kome myhakahves faadu keedaane. Vahaka liyumaky kihaa bura kameakan aharen v rangalah dannan. Keep it up. You ll be a bright n successful writer one day.

32. Vrh rangalhu moral eh libey story eh.. gud luk..????????????????

33. Alhe mi meehun mi story ah cmt kuranee Lovena eh cmt eh kureema tha? fake ba eh.. Lovenaa ekoa…. hadi hadi nameh… neyge mashakah.. mihaaru mi site ah Zaahee eh vadhe eyna famous vejje enmen therey… dhen mifaharu lovena…. laahikeh noon thi lovena eh famous vaakah… Zaahee ves famous veema agu e vettu nee… Zaahee namuga eyna ge cousin kokko nuzha ah ehcehi kiyaa hedhy mi Ushaanaa… molheh nu.. Zaahee ves jeheynee e hurihaa reethi kameh mashah dheyn… egijjetha Zaahee.. dhen othee e lovena eh.. ragalhah viyya e eee eyna imagin nameh… thi nan ves jeheynee mi Ushaanaa ah dheyn… mi gaumuga famous meehakah hunnan jeheynee aharen.. Ushaana.. enmen loibaa ihthiraam hoadhan

34. thee hadha amilla edhun bodu meehekey dw… i know lovena… eee class mate eh… v reethivane.. but eyna ge reethikaan eyna ekakah vess nudhahkka… ehn kudhin isthshi gandu stylish thakah hadhaagen dhaa iru eyna neenaane enme style eh ves…. Minivan dhuvahu ves dhimaavi.. v simple koh huree..ehn kudhin reethi party hedhumaa ehchihi laa iru eyna fageereee kee nooney.. emeehun v mussadhi.. eynage alamaari furaa hunnaane party hedhun..nulaane dhuvahaku ves eyge hedhumeh.. lee enme dhuvahaku.. dhahtha wedding ga…. meycup eh ves nukoh hunna iru nulaa hiku loabi

35. mi Ana akaa hedhi dhen dw… mee kaaku adhi mithanah vadhe aga kohppan… Faku Faku ba eh…. kaley men reethi veema aharen hadi viyas jey eh nuvey… Aharen kalhu baburu gandekey meehun kiyas dhereh nuvey.. gin faharu roveny ufalun… huh.. heevejje tha… kaley eychekey meechekey kiyaa…. :j 😮 🙂 🙂 rakkatheri vachey dhoony

36. Stop it now.. now.. now… NAKKO USHAANA kiyaa ehchissah nubalabala.. don’t worry.. ahannah dhine vey ehcheh nama mihaarun mihaarah ves mi reethikan dhineemey… ekam mee dhevey ehcheh noon.. dhen Ushaana.. ARE YOU MADE.. mi reethi kan liibuneema minivan koh magaku nuhigeyne.. nudhve veyne.. frihen kudhinna hedhi… Ushaana beynun iraku magah niume beynnun gothakh ulhevey dw miharu….So addhi aharumen meee frds ehves noon dw. u are just shouting at me… like a kid… dhen sikudi beynun kohba… thimaage reethikameh noon dw beynumee… dhuniye mathee naacharee hingaa frihenun fahathun thimaaa v reechey kiyaa dhuvun tha muhinmeee.. egothah dhuviyas kkonmes dhuvaheh aadhey…. e dhvahu mi dhunyeaga thibi enmen kurimatheega amilla ah kuri kanthakuge vaahaka dhahkka iru kobaa theenage ladhu…. ladhu gannan jehey kmekey mee….
    miadhu Naakko vex e kiiyaadhinee aharenge hageegai.. e ee thedheh… but u want suvaru eage abadhuge ufaatha noony only 1 hour ge ufaatha? huvafeneh fadha in… mee huvafen….. Sorry… ahannah mi reeethikan kalaa ah dheveynama dheynan..
    -Lavna Kausar-

37. hevey… lavhaanulaa shoa.. so baai.. ehn tha? first u ah men fenigen nikan thihen vidhaalhuvey… eyrun dhevana faharu kameh ves kureveynee… hahhahaha.. looser…. upss… sorry.. good night and u can’t do nything for us… and Nikaaee ah ves… eee thibeyfulhaage besty eh noon dw…. ana ah thibeyfulhaage all information igea.. ur full name is Aishath Ushaana Gaadhir… 29 yrs old… so dhen all privet information ah dhandhen eba huri… so bad eh noon dw information hoadhan…. thee male ga huri meeheh ves nooneh nu dw….. dhen mivarah buneveynee.. dhen nubenuveyne mithaaku… wait!!!!!!!! 17 august 2015 ga viligleee beach in meet kurey… ethaa police men bandhu kohffa hunna thanga me and lav thibeynan.. with 2 police… annaathi

38. lav buneeeee alhaanuulaashoa.. but e thanua liyevnee 2 vana word balaaa.. dhaathi e thanah ushana….

39. Anekka Mee aharen ge class mate shai tha

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