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1. Whattttt??? Ehaa faseyhain human eh nooney kiyaafa eyna kairiah dhaan eaky kid eh noon dhw.. Dhn heevany genesdheny thankolheh kurukoh henn…Is this ur first stry dhw…. heevany ingey.. ekamu mistakes thah rangalhu kollaafa ithuru hiyyvarakaa eku kuriyah dhiyayyaa kaamiyabu vaane… so gud luck nxt time…

   1. Asluves dhw.. Eii ky kid Eh noon viyyaa… N Hadha kurey Mi part ves… Dhen part eh dhigu koh dhehchey plx…

   2. I agree with scarlet and gina ginain practice kuriyya hama varah reethi vaanehen hyvany and mistakes rangalhu kohlumah edhen and may allah grant u with a bright future… Umm ru that aishath nasrth…

   3. Ingi dhaane thaa vegen ulhe gotheh next part gai vedhaane dhw eyna mom fonuvy kamah ves noony eiy huvafeneh kamahves…

   4. Busy kamun…. mjob ga..

2. If u don’t mind… can I ask u something… ASAP reply this plzz… I wanna ask u something ingey… Don’t mind dear…

   1. I wanna ask u that, thee the kitty aa vaahaka dhehki kujjaky??? Dn’t mind ingey… I saw a comment in ishaa’s comments blog inn… so ahaaly…

3. Furathama story aa balaafa its nice..

4. I think you guys meehunaa jahsaalaafa hunnah. kinda rude.

   1. Its not being rude.. Rangalhu kohlan jehey than than kolhu kiyaa dhinumaky rude vumeh noon

5. Kuru vefa hamanujehey gotheh ebahuri
   Maa avahah liye nimmalan ulhey hen hivany

6. I will ??

7. ibaaraai reethi kolaafa n describe kolun reethi kuriima furihama vaane bunedhen beynunvaa echeh kiyaa meehaa ah manzar sifavaanehen bunediniyaa varah salhi vaane. u have telent u can do it.

8. vaahaka miahvuren dhigu kohlachey hope u will do that. vaahaka nimendhen liyan vaane ingey.

9. okay. i just felt hen ?

   1. Dhn try being positive. Then u won’t even feel like that

10. I don’t like the way you have wrote this story. interesting a little. can u improve it in next part…….

11. The plot seems interesting but the details and ur way of describing is not good. Maybe u could add their reactions and how they felt. And the way this story is going is way too fast and if u want to make it longer, u could add filler chapters/parts. Anyway, take ur time…Good luck

12. !!Yessss i will ….improve

13. Hadha mistakes ginaey
    Liyaairu buye bunye nuliyaane…
    Ibaaraith kurun varah poor…

14. Vrh vrh mistakes eba huri..????????????Bt if yuh try u can improve..Lyk SCARLET ❤ bunihen ehaa faseyha in miii human eh nooney bunefa kairi ah ai thankolhu hama eh gothakah vx hama eh nujehe..????????????jiji aky vx enme molhu myhaa ekey noon mi bunany????..hykuran positive comment eh gothuga Nasrath balaigannaane kamah????????..

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