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Comments (47)

1. K Kookie 7y ago

   Varah reethi vaane hen Hervey.. kn irakun dhn in part genesdheny.. i cant wait to read next part. Avahah up kohdhehchey?????????❤❤❤❤?????

2. N NODDY 7y ago

   gadha ingey
   HAMA habeys

3. I Ibsha 7y ago

   Reethi

4. Z Zeish 7y ago

   thank you so much

5. A Anonymous 7y ago

   Reethi vaaneheh heevani… ?
   When next part?

   1. Z Zeish 7y ago

      Anonymous

      next part Insha Allah sunday ga

6. Z Zeish 7y ago

   ahsalaam alikum huri haakudhi thank you so much hurihaakudhin . mee zeish negi fiyavlheh . mi fiyavalh zeish negee bodu azumakaaeku . iraadha kurehviyya mi vaahaka nimendhen up kohdheynan . alhugadumenaky kiyavaa kudhin . ehenvyma hiehnuvey avahah up vaaneheneh . dhen ehen weekendakah inthizaaru kohlaa . iraadha kurehvihya maadhan up kohdheynan alhugadumen ves beynun ehen writers akaa ehgothah konme dhuvahaku vaahaka up kuran . kiyuntheringe faraathun nihaayathaa eku maafah edhen . ei zeish ah konme dhuvahaku vaahaka up nukureveythy . alhugadhumenah vee varakun mi vaahaka up kohlaadheynan varah ufaa vehje kiyuntherinnah mi vaahaka kamudhiyaima . veema adhives ehfaru thank you ey hama buneveyny . hurihaakudhinah ufaaveri faagathi dhuvahkah edhen . vahsalaam alikum.

7. N NODDY 7y ago

   ????its ok dear we will wait
   Kiyavaa kudhinnah vaguthu nuvaanekan ves engey
   Keep up the good work
   We will wait ….

   1. Z Zeish 7y ago

      NODDY

      Hahaha NODDY ge vaahaka ves reethi vaane kamah ummeedhu kuran
      🙂 🙂

8. A Amza 7y ago

   V reethi thi kudhin thi liyunu vaahaka v kiyaahiyhun huhtta nimuny next partah inthizaaru kohgen mihiry

   1. Z Zeish 7y ago

      Amza

      Thanks in sha allah v varakun up kohdheynan
      INTHIZAARU KOHLAA…

9. S Sh 7y ago

   Mee groupehge workehtha? Alhugandumenney kiyaathy..

   1. Z Zeish 7y ago

      Sh

      Ya its a group work

10. N NODDY 7y ago

    ya bio info ga ves e iny nu a group of girls ey so its a group

11. A Anonymous 7y ago

    So proud of you my niece. This piece of writing is so much better compared to the writings of adults. Keep up the good work ????

    1. Z Zeish 7y ago

       Anonymous

       thanks sissy???

12. A Asu 7y ago

    Kudhi kudhi mistake thah ebahuri like liyumuge kuh… Up kollaairu kiyaalaafa kohlaa eyrun In Sha Allah v salhi vaane sifa kurin n overall koh vaahaka v salhi

    1. Z Zeish 7y ago

       Asu

       thank u kiyaa leema and mistakes thah faahaga koh dhinyma
       IN SHA ALLAH DHEN IN PART GA MISTAKES RANGALHU KOHLAANAN

13. R Rivaan 7y ago

    V salhi

    1. Z Zeish 7y ago

       Rivaan

       THANKS

14. T Thoooo 7y ago

    As asu has mentioned some mistakes are their in typing and discribing and overall its
    nice and curiously waiting???

    1. Z Zeish 7y ago

       Thoooo

       Thanks
       Insha allah mistake thah rangalhu kohlaanan and thank
       mistakes faahaga kohdhiny ma???

15. P Pole star 7y ago

    V salhi. Adhi heekuran miayhvure reethi vaahaka zeish nereynekamah.adhi asu bunelihen mizstake thah rangalhu kohlaanekamah.

    1. Z Zeish 7y ago

       Pole star

       Thanks in sha allah rangalhu kohlaanan
       HEHE adhi mi vaahaka liye ninmaafa dhw ithuru vaahaka eh nereveyny

16. S SPARED 7y ago

    HAMA habehey buneveyny
    THIHIRA sifa kurumeh
    HAMA GAIN HEEBIHI NAGAIGEN DHEY??????

    1. Z Zeish 7y ago

       SPARED

       hehe thanks dear???

17. I Ishaan 7y ago

    vrh habeys… n this your first dhw… umeedhu kuran mi stry ge dhevanabey up kohley dheyne kamah????

    1. Z Zeish 7y ago

       Ishaan

       Ya insha allah tomorrow and thanks vaahaka kamu dhyaeema

18. G Gud❤ 7y ago

    Nice..❤

    1. Z Zeish 7y ago

       Gud❤

       ???THANKS DEAR

19. Q Queen Dandelion 7y ago

    Next prt avahah up kohdhehchey??Masha allah..woah???KEEP IT UP

20. Z Zeish 7y ago

    Thanks dear insha allah next part tomorrow

21. L Lai 7y ago

    V reethi vaahakaei…zeish thee konrashei

22. L Lai 7y ago

    VRH REETHI….kon rasheh zeish.??

    1. Z Zeish 7y ago

       Lai

       baheee seyboan lai
       mi dhineee hint eh dhen ammila ah guess kurey

    2. L Lai 7y ago

       Lai

       ohh.. NAIFARU dhw…. ekam zeish kiyaa kujjeh noolheine kanneynge naifaraku??

    3. Z Zeish 7y ago

       Lai

       hehehe its a group

    4. L Lai 7y ago

       Lai

       ey…noddy ves dhw

23. S Shaa 7y ago

    Haadha reehchey?
    V kihyaahithum indhaa nimuny. 2 vana bayah inthizaarukuraanan.

24. P paree 7y ago

    varah folhi hurikan faahaga kohlevey. sifakurun ithuru kurumun vaahaka ithurah furihama vaanekamah belevey.

25. X Xoona 7y ago

    VERY nice story but i think next part will up next week

26. X Xoona 7y ago

    V nice but zeish ehen vaahaka eh nereyne kamah unmeedh kuran adhives ehfaharu bunelan beynun dhen liyaairu mistakes ragalhu kohlumah v nice story THANK YOU

27. X Xoona 7y ago

    V nice but zeish ehen vaahaka eh nereyne kamah unmeedh kuran adhives ehfaharu bunelan beynun dhen liyaairu mistakes ragalhu kohlumah *ehen v nice story THANK YOU

28. X Xoona 7y ago

    V nice but zeish ehen vaahaka eh nereyne kamah unmeedh kuran adhives ehfaharu bunelan beynun dhen liyaairu mistakes ragalhu kohlumah *ehen v nice story THANK YOU and i also MADE a mistake but dhen faharakun ragalhu kohlaanan THANK YOU for all

29. X Xoona 7y ago

    *edhen

30. X Xoona 7y ago

    *edhen
    SORRY mifaharu vestibulum mistake eh hedhuneethee THANKS TO EVERY ONE

31. X Xoona 7y ago

    *ves SORRY that is typing mistakes SORRY for EVERY ONE form
    my
    SORRY for all of you. THANK YOU

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