ތިޔަ ލޯތްބާ ދުރަށް (10) ފަހުބައި

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1. me first

   1. Thnxxx maul

2. Mi story ga vee nuvee eh neygi mi nimunee…aslu v reethi hen heevi ekamakuves nimmaligoi kamaku nudhey..maa avas koh nimmaley ves ..adhi vaahaka liyaairuga ves aharemenge mujuthamayaai gulhey vaahaka thah genes dhinnama ragalhuvees…ehbafaa meehun rape koh adhi nuvithaakah loabee ves vevunee..aslu vaahakaige bathalunge loabi jeheyne kaamiyaabu kuran nimeyiru viyas …

   1. Thnxxx Ziff …not every story has a happy ending…. mimujthamauga vs naslu olhun vrh aaanmu…

   2. mi vaahakaiga rythikoh bunefa eboiy neyngumeh therey rape koh loabi vi vaahaka ves..and mi mujthamaugai ves mihaaru fennamun dhaa kan kan mii hama..i agree with the author

   3. Thn q Chaer

3. Wow
   Amazing

   1. Thnxxx hajam

4. Wow vvv reethi❤❤❤???

   1. Thnxxx shiman

5. Mi part kamakunudhey.. BT ehn part that v v reethi

   1. Thnxxxx neela

6. Story very nice

   1. Thn Q N

7. nimunei tha alhey vvvv reethi hama obi

   1. Thn Q thaara

8. Midhencocheh. But u can still improve yo self.???????????

   1. Thn Q lam

9. Story aslu v rythi…. Mihaaru society ga madhun nama vx mikahala kanthah hingaa… Vaan ge frnd akah vx dhimaavi ekahala kameh… Rattehi vegn 4yrs ulhefa marry kuraa hisaabah dhiyaima mi nguny that they were brother n sister… I mean ehbafaa dhemyhun kan…

   1. Yh vaan… i mean livaan….. i knw eii mi raajjeyga vs vamundhaa kamehkan…

   2. Btw nanni ah livaan ge name vrh reethi vjje… so nanni ge upcomin story ehga livaan ge name usekollan nimmaefin…

10. mashahkah ves v nu v eh neygunu.

    1. Thn Q aisha

11. Woww… vrh vrh reethi naff… amazingg… obiness to the maxxx…. ♥♥♥♥… plx plx plx… avahhh naff ge new stry eh gnsdhhcheyy… lysm…♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

    1. Thn Q mishy… vrh ufaavejje story kamudhiyaeema….

12. Story feshun iru heevu reethi vaane hen but it wasnt cox of many reasons ingey
    Ehmeh first kamakah rape kohlaa meehkau dheke meehun loabi eh nuvaane ??
    And shaa aa shaiman ge vaahaka ves nei ehaa salhi kon genehsa kaa eh … and this story heevanee ehn meeheh ge story eh kiyaafa eygen ideas nagaafa cut and paste kohlaafa huri hen baeh than thanuga … try to bring something new ? dont try to copy others ?? and story heevanee nunimigen konmes gothakah nimaalaafa oi hen …. so i hope to read a story from u .. which is more more improved than this ??

    1. there wont be anything i had copied from anyone elses story

13. Vaahaka v reethi obiness to the max

    1. Thnxxxxxx Ayshlyn

14. cool

15. veenuvee eh neyngun
    rifa tha noony banduga oiy dharifulhu tha save v?
    operation kaamiyaabu nuvaane dhw dhemyhun ves maru v ma eh #confusing

    1. Thn q sasha

16. Hiikurin warah reethi waane kamah.. ekm hiikuri gotheh nuun?‍♀️?‍♀️?‍♀️

    1. Thn Q
       Nathu

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