ތިޔަ ލޯތްބާ ދުރަށް……………( ޓްރެއިލަރ)

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1. Vvv reethi story eh

   1. thnnxxxxx

2. Vv reethi story eh …waiting for next part….

   1. Thnxxx

3. Feshun reethi?
   Waiting for next part??

   1. Thnxxx Sana

4. Feshun vrh vrh reethi… strii nimn dhn gensdhhcheyy… whn nxt prt???curiouslii waitinn…♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

   1. Thnxxx mishy

5. maa shaa allah… feshun vrh reethi… ekam ves liyuntheriyaa ah improve koh leveyne baeh than thankolhu ebahuri.. e bai thah kiyaala dheynan… iru eyge duty adhaa kuri thankolhu kudakoh alhaigaiyy.. dhivehi story akah vaa iru liyuntheriyaa kiyaidhey bai jeheynee dhivehi koh kiyaidheyn… ehn v ma iru eyge vaajib adhaa kuraa kamah liyunyma vrh furihama vaane.. in sha allah. 🙂 dhn vaahakaige main character ah nickname eh v namaves liyuntheriyaa jeheynee aslu name beynun kuran.. meehun bunaa vaahaka thah genna iru shen kithanme varakah ves beynun kuran v hama.. ekam liyuntheriyaa, main character ge aslu name beynun kuryma emme furihama vaany.. noony fahun kiyuntherinnah suvaalu ufedheyne main character ge aslu name aa dheytherey.. 🙂 you’ve done good job but you can also improve your writing… you have the ability to write so don’t give up… try harder to reach a good result.. 🙂 in sha allah you can.. 🙂

   1. Friends kiyaanee Shen, mamma men shaanaa that’s it. Eyrun reethi vaane

   2. Thnxxx Aesh

6. And, curiously waiting for the story… avahah up koh dhehchey.. 🙂

   1. Thnxxx Aesh…..

7. Marsha allah vrh reethi…..waiting for the nxt…unmeedhu kuran vaahaka nimen dhn up kuraane kamah…..gud luck…..????

   1. thi gothah Ma shaa Allah liyunyma meaning change vaane.. Ma shaa Allah eng in liyeveyne 3 gotheh indhey eii Ma shaa Allah, Mashallah and Masha’Allah..

   2. Thnxxx lee

8. Varah reethi…hope kuran story nimen dhen genes dheyne kamah?

   1. Thnxxx eleven

9. I hope story nimen dhen genesdheynekamah.. Vv reethi feshun.. And Aesh buni thankolhu thah rangalhu kohlanikoh v perfect vaane.. Waiting for Next part… ????

10. thnk you emmn ah vs…. Insha allah next part ga readers thi himanaali point thakah iskameh dheynan…… vrh avahah next part up kureveythw try kuraaanan…. once again thnk u……….

11. Seems interesting

    1. Thank You………

12. Seems nice.. best of luck ???

    1. Thank you lotus

13. maasha allah vvvv rythi feshumehh….ekm rangalhu kohlan jehey kuda kuda mistakes eba huri….ekm kuri ah dhaa varakah rangalhu kuraane kamah ummeedhu kurann……hoping for the best dhw….luv u….

    1. Thnxxx naash nashaya

14. Hurihaa vaahakaehgaivess hunnanee ehphotoehtha? ? dhen hadidhw ehen hureema. Ekamaku vaahaka varah nala hiygaimugotheh ebahuri ?

    1. ehehehehhe. thnxxx lily

15. varah salhi mi story..aeesh buni point thah rangalhu kollyma varah furihama vaane… varah kiyaalaa hithun mihury..ummeedhu kuran next part varah avahah genesdheyne kamah.. and dont give up okay..hate comments ves dheyne varah gina myhun but dont mind them ingey..ulheyne baeh myhun jelous vegen ves.. keep up the good work..lysm ????????

16. yh thnk you alot guyss……luv u alot…… midhuvaskolhu bxy kamun up nukollevign miulheny…….

17. feyshun varah reethi vaahaka nimen dhen ves reethi vaane kamah unmeedhu kuran

    1. Thnxxx Shanhaa

18. Feshun Reethi
    Hope vaahaka Reethi vaane kamah

19. Thank you hama

20. Varath reethi hama obiness

21. thnk u vrh bodah

22. Varah salhi

23. thnk u

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