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1. Dhe folhuvaiy liyanyaa nuliunas vaane

2. Haadha kuh ginaeyyyy.. Sukun kurumugai v visnaanulevi hurikan faahaga kurevey… Dhen maa kuruvesme dho…

3. Varah reethi! kudakoh mistakes huriyas liyun varakah improve vaany 🙂 Ekam maa bodah ves kurukoh othy. Ummeedhu kuran vaahaka kuriyah oiy thaanga dhigukoh genesdheyne kamah. do your best 🙂

4. vaahaka nuliye rashutherein ehen kommes kamakaa ulhen v ehnnu..me dhen boduvaru..meehun vaahaka liyaathee vaahaka liyanee dho

   1. luyoon j v dhw. hehehe……
      Cmmnt kuraairu ehn myhun ge fylings ah visnaalaanama.

5. Vaahakaigai liyumuge kuhh varah gina kamah faahaga kurevey. mikan rangalhu kurun varah muhinmu.

6. Mistakes thah varh gina…dhn faharakun rangalhu kohlahchey…adhi miah vure dhigu koh genes dheyne kamah heekuran

7. Wat the hell. Vaahaka eh noon liyan veekee.dhivehi liyan kiyan dhaskuranvee..bloody loser….

8. omg me vaahakaehtha… hehe. alhe thiha kurukoh genas dhenya ok vaahaka nuliyunas…. hehe
   thige miyhunnah kiyani miyhun vaahaka liyathi liyan ulheniyye. e ok liyan nengunas. konmeves ehen kamaka ulhe…??????

9. Ehves myhak ehfaharun molheh nuvaane! Liumah faad kiyanvaany malaamaathge gothugaeh noon. Liuntheritaa ah bunelan beynunvany kuriah dhaashey, ekam liyefa kiyaalaa eyga hurikuhthah rangalhukuraashey. Eyrun myhun balaagunna fadha liuntheriakah iraadhakurehvehya veveyne.

10. Vahaka reethi..masha hyvany liyun theriyaa yah ves ihithiraam kuran vaaneh hen.. ehves myhaku ehfaharun molheh nuvaaneh.. ehves myhakah reethi noonniyah nukeemah vy dhw ???

11. vvv reethi vaahakaeh mi vaahaka liyeninmaafa up kurumugekurin kiyaalaathi visnuntherikamaaekee kuriyahgossiyaa midhaairaain kuriyahdheveene kujjehthee

12. vaahaka heevey reethi vaanehen.. bt there r so many mistekes ingey,,, ehaame kuru.. vaahaka kiyaa hiy vaany adhi thankolheh dhigu koh genesdhinyma.. mistakes thah rangalhu kohlaafa thankolheh dhogu kohlaane kamah ummeedhu kuran dhen faharakun.

13. Adhi kiyuntherinvesjeheyne liyuntheriya ah ihuthiraamkuran ekaku anekakah ihuthiraamkuraabayakah aharamen vamaatho

14. Haadha kuh gina ey…kuh thah rangalhu kohlaaa ?gud try

15. alhey mi dhen kohcheh. “ބޯޑު” “ގައިފޯޅަމުން” “ބޯޑުވަރު” “ސޯރީ” “ބޯޑުދައިތަ” obo fili hunnanvee thanthaanga hus oaboa fili. pis pis pis. boa halaak. i rquest the writer not to continue this story anmore. please. vaahaka liyaa hurihaakudhinnah huri huthureh miee.
    no hard feelings 🙂

16. varah kuh gina kamah faahanga kurevey.
    adhi sukun thakugai ves massala eba ulhey.
    dhen liyaa part ehgai mi kanthah rangalhu kohfi nama varah reethi vaane.
    all the best. 😀

17. Mistake eba huri but rozy liyaa vahaka ah vure reethi hen heevanee good luck

18. Mistakes aa ehvarah foto ves varah sakaraiy.. mikahala foto alhugandah v kamunudhay..

19. anonymas r agree inge..
    Rythi..
    Ekam dhe jumla liyunyma kamaku nudhrne dhw… ..

20. Dear writer….
    There are lots of mistakes and some punctuation marks like komaakoalhi is missing…. plus it’s really short,………. correct these issues and then surrly the story will be lovely…. the concept and idea of the story looks good……best of luck and keep going

21. And please…..if u can, plesde change the picture…. it’s not a v appropriate picture

22. V ryti vaane hen heevany.. Hama yagynun ves story ge name v v v salhi…

23. Mistake ebahuri dhen inna bai up kohlaairu dhigukoh up kohdhehchey dhen liyelaafa kiyaala eyrun igeyneh nu mistake huriya gina faharu liyaa meehaa ah mistake nufenaane eiee kiee mahsala eh noon gina in liee varakah ragalhuvaane… story varah reethi… waitting for nxt part☺

24. Mi vaahaka up kohdheebala thankolhe dhigukoh vvvvvv reethi mi vaahaka kuriyah oibaikiyaahithun Hama bunelee kiyuntheringefaraathunlibey comment akee hivvarehkamah dhekigenkuriyah dhanvi kithanme molhuliyuntheriakahvias kusheliyevumakee Hama vedhaanekameh

25. wow..vvv reethi..

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