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1. woww immuuu…. vrhhh salhi ingey.. dhn in prt dhigu khlnchey ingey.. vrh vrh salhi… 😉 waitin fr nxt prt.. n gud lck.. n readrs ge faadu kiyunthah rangalhah balaigahnaathi plus imprve vx kuraathi ingey.. 😉

   1. thnx ryn.. luv u.. kiyuntheringe faadu kiynthah balaaigannaanan like u said ryn

2. Vvvvvvvvvvvv hadi??

   1. konthanaeh thw hadee… eyrun nxt prt liyaairu rangalhu kohlaanan

3. Aawwnn. salhi. waiting for next part. best of luck and u can improve. and this part is really short so pls nxt part dhigu kohllahchey inge. all the very best.

   1. thnx luvna alt… m so happy u lyk it… nxt prt dhgu kollaaanan 😀

4. guyz… aslu immy belee mi stry ge furthama prt ah supprt libey varshey…
   so ehenve aslu shrt kollee…. nxt prt dhigu kollaanan.. insha allah….
   hope u lyk it everyone……….

5. wow! very nice! waiting fo the next part! n next part dhigu kolachea! plx…

6. thnx mice…… varah avahah nxt prt vx up kollaanan… n everyone is sayin its shrt…… 4 sure nxt prt dhigu kllaanan 😀

7. varah reethi… nxt part uvaha up kohdhechey mi stry varah kiyaa hiyvey

   1. thnx reader… m glad u lyk it… hope u will lyk nxt prt 😀

8. Nice..story ge feshun….immy haadha kurey :-p hehe…waiting for the next part…heekuran mi vaahaka aky v reethi vegen dhaane vaahaka eykamah…so best of luck.. 🙂 🙂

   1. thnx naxoo… ya i konw the stry is very shrt…. dh nxt prt dhigu kollaanan
      :3

9. Wow Immy mi part varah salhi. waiting for the next part. 🙂 and please dhigu koh up kuranchey. and i have a question.. i saw few comments of you and ryn which makes me think that you both know each other well. do you know each? just asking bc i like her stories too and now yours. 🙂 good luck

   1. thnx… ys iknow her very well… she is my fav cux.. do u really like me n her stories.. thts a very excitin news i luv u….. 😀 😀 😀 😀

   2. ya kind of copied her tyoin cx its very nyc 2 me… i copy her v well…. hehehehe thnx fr being immy n ryn ge fan ah…. luv alt…. cni plx tell me ur real name.. i really wnt to know my 1st fans nam… hehehe ;D ;D 😀 😀

10. Awesome

    1. thnx sanmu

11. Hey Immy.. this story seems very interesting and nice.. waiting for next part just make it little long. and i have a question. i have seen few comments of you and ryn and it seems like you both know well.. just want to know that do you both know each other.? and i am a big fan of ryn and now yours too. and you write just like her. kekeke. and as she said try to improve. and konme meehaku konme ehcheh kiyas accept it. 🙂 good luck.. and please make it long overall the story is nice

    1. thnx n can u tell me one thing.. r u a frnd of ryn. cz ryn just suspected lyk tht… n thnx again fr being our fan… thnx alt…….. luv u alt

12. “haadha maishan nuffenathanakun” mithan kolhu ga v alhaiganna gothei hurey…i feel it has to be like “maishan haadha nufennathanakun”….hope next time u ll improve de vocabulary…wish u good luck with ur work….. ???

13. thnx… ya iknow,,, i luv the way she types thats y i type like her.. i kind of copied her typin… hhehe 😀 😀 😀 😀 luv u so much… varah ufaavejje ryn n immy e fan eh hurikan ingunyma… cnt believe even.. we both hav fans???? espeially me.. i only rote summery n one prt… oh m so excited…..its unbelievable…. thnxxx 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 :

14. nyc story.. avahah up kurahcheyyy 🙂

    1. thnx aleem.. maadhama faharehga up kuraanan nxt prt

15. thnx ken 4 tellin me my mmistake.. i will improve the mistakes that u ha told 4 sure ken.. thnx again 4 tllin me my mistake

16. When next part …I love this story ???

17. Awwwwnnn thnx alt saadhaa m so hppy cx everyone loves my stry….
    insha allah maadhamaa nxt prt up kuraanan insha allah… 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 🙂 😀 😉 😉 😉

18. Its good. But Im sure you can do better than this. I dont have a single doubt about you won’t being able to do it. You can do it. Ill always support you. Cx i knw that this is your first story.. Plx do check out the third paragraph. There are some sentences with mistakes. Like “hi maish. Haadha nufenna thaakun mi fenuny”. I feel it should be something like “hi maish. Haadha nufenna THANAKUN mi fenuny”.. hope you would do better next time. Good luck 🙂

19. *about you not being able to do it*

20. thnx kiyuntheriyaa. m so happy 2 konw tht u ll support me n tht u dnt hve a sngle doubt bout me nt being ble 2 do it… thnx alt… i hope u lyk my nxt prt… n i will take ur advice v well… i wil try 2 imprv my mistkes insha allah.. thnx again fr findin ut my mistks

21. nice story…v v v nice..good luck

    1. thnx malak…. hpe u lyk nxt prt 2

22. Vrh vrh vrh habeys..kyp it uppppp

    1. thnx nuhnuu…… 🙂 🙂

23. varra vess salghi ingey 🙂 …….. vara habeys waiting for the next par 🙂

24. v v v v reethi waiting 4 the next part

25. Vaahaka varah reethi.. immy ge aslu nan bunelaaba..

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