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1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

   mi ee alhugandu mi site gai liyunu furathama waahaka.. unmeedhu kuran kiyun therinnah kamudhaane kamah.. thibeyfulhun ge faadu kiyun eii alhugandu ge kuri erun.. 🙂

2. I iraa 11y ago

   Perfect…V Salhi…

   1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

      iraa

      thank you 🙂

   2. M Midy 11y ago

      iraa

      Not bad 🙂

3. S Shabee 11y ago

   hey lam…vrh habyes mi story…vrh vrh vrh rythi… 🙂 i luv it..but mistakes ebahuri thahumahtherin eh noon ingey..rahumahtherin ingey…hehe i knw it was a spelling mistake… 😉 but still dis story is perfect… 😀 adhi first vaahaka v ma maa bodahvx rangalhu..i hope lam ge ithuru stories thakeh fennaane kamah…adhi dhigu story eh liyedhehchey…masha allah u have da talent…oll da bst 😛

   1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

      Shabee

      thank you so much shabee… yah insha allah adhi ithuru waahakathah fennaane 🙂

4. A aathu 11y ago

   Nice story.. ekm baeh thankolhu kolhuga kuh hurikan faahaga kurevey.. u can be a gud writer..gudluck lamyarr

   1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

      aathu

      thank you 🙂

5. R ryyn 11y ago

   i like it.. waiting for another story.. aslu hama frst stry aai balaafa habeys.. I luv it.. vrh salhi.. gd lck 🙂 🙂 🙂 <3

   1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

      ryyn

      thank you so much ryyn 🙂

6. S sofoo 11y ago

   Kurimagu vara ujaalaavaane .himAthaa eku masaka kuraathi story vara nyce .umeedh kurany adhives mikahala rythi story thake fenigen dhaane kama .

   1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

      sofoo

      than Q 🙂
      insha allah adhi ithuru waahaka thah fennaane 🙂

7. T Thoo 11y ago

   thankolheh kuree but v v salhi

   1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

      Thoo

      thank u

8. L luvna 11y ago

   hei lam.the story is really nice. its the bitter truth dw that some dont undestand the value of true love. but first story aa balaa vrh ves nice. hope to see more and more stories of you. loved the story. and good luck.

   1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

      luvna

      thank you 🙂

9. A Anonymous 11y ago

   Mee coahcheh? Mee meehehge aadheys thakeh nu.. Faadehge diary eh kahala gothah liyefa oi ehcheh mee. Ekamaku furathama vaahaka aa balaafa K.. V Gina sukunuge kuh eba huri.. Keeh vaany meehehge gaathu ahaalaigen namaves nuvatha netun balaigen namaves dhivehi bahuge gavaaidhu balaaliyya.. Ginaeehunnah sukun ves jahaane gotheh neyge.. Dhen e vaguthaku hithah eri ehcheh jahaalany.. Ummedh kuran dhen faharakun ragalhu vaane kamah.. Kaamiyaabah edhen
   . ma mihen bunaatheeves mashah bon alhaa.. Ekamaku hageegai vaany hageegathah dhoa.. Liyuntheriyaa ah kuri erun edhey meehaku e liyumakah faadu kiyaa ne.. Gina meehunnah heevany vaahaka aky hama ekani munifoohi filuvaa ehchekey.. Ekamaku vaahakaige zareeaain kutin neygey ethah aa basthakeh dhasve baskoshaaru mihsadhi vumaa bahuge fenvaru ragalhu vun fadha ethakeh faidhaa eh libey

   1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

      Anonymous

      varah bodah sukuriyya thi dhehvi hiyaalah… alhugandu gaboolu kuran alhuganduge vaahakaiga kuh hurikan… insha allah dhen liyaa vaahaka eh miyah vure rangalhu kuran varah masahkaiyy kuraanan 🙂

10. I isha 11y ago

    bagvaaas!!!!!!

11. Z zai 11y ago

    Oh my god..zai ge lyf ga vii hurihaa kameh mi story ga eba huri..enme thankolheh fiyavaa hurihaa thaneh hama zai ge lyf ga hingi..?..btw story v salhi

    1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

       zai

       thank you zai.. 🙂

12. L Liyuntheriyaa 11y ago

    If I take liberty to write in English it is because it is so very difficult to write in Divehi in this comments column which is, regrettably, not designed with our right- to- left thaana script in mind. Coming to the story I would think it is fairly commendable coming from a novice as the writer’s admission at the head of the column implies. The many spelling errors could have been all together avoided if the writer has taken care to go through the draft. Lamyarr, next time , please read the final draft to a friend prior to publication.This will help you not only to spot the typos and spelling errors but also to polish the text for greater conciseness and clarity and rhyme. Lack of a strong plot ( or being merely a voice as a critic has pointed out) is really not an issue so long as you were able to capture the mood and convey a vission of life in your story which you did quite well.However,you have not named your baby very well. Why go through something if it is
    utterly hopeless(Ummedeh neh)? That name only gave away the plot! Do
    name your stories attractively, in a way that captures the reader’s interest without killing it.This story could have been named Intizaar even if the waiting is hopeless, Quite obviously you are a talent in bud. It needs to bloom and spread its fragrance. I wish you success and expect to read many more of your stories in the future.

    1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

       Liyuntheriyaa

       thank you so much 🙂

13. F Faxoo 11y ago

    v.reethi..

    1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

       Faxoo

       thanxx 🙂

14. A alhugandu 11y ago

    Lamyarr,,,,,
    Molhu reethi iburaathun fashuvi koh liyefavaa loabeege basthakeh! Bodah belevenee, hageegi haadhisaayakah binaakoh liyefavaa liyumehkamah,

    1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

       alhugandu

       thank you 🙂

15. S Sparrow 11y ago

    mee lam ge hayaathaa haadha gulhun huri vaahaka eh hen heeveyey…

16. M meezo 11y ago

    milu v v v v shali
    i luv it

    1. L Lamyarr 11y ago

       meezo

       thank you

17. S samee 11y ago

    V nyc.. Bt maa kurey… Dhn fahara kun digukoh genes dehchey…..

18. M mine 11y ago

    Vrh salhi vaahaka eh..hithah asaru kuruvaa vaahaka eh..adhi mivaahaka dhigu kohlaafi nama miah vure vs reethi vaane kamah lafaa kurevey..anyways vrh nice aslu vs..adhi vs ithuru stories thakakah I’m waiting..gud luck dear..

19. A aishaa 11y ago

    lam thix storie ix amazing…….mashaa allah…….nd i wnt share somethng wid u plxxxxx……

20. C Cupcake 10y ago

    Kudakoh twisteh laabala, miaku nethennu alhaiganna kahala kameh??? Best of luck for ur other stories

21. M Myhaa 10y ago

    Mi dhn v aamu gothakah liyefai in vaahakaeeh ekm mulhiakun goaheh nun ingey

22. R raaz 10y ago

    raaz experience kurin mi kanthah thah. raaz ge life ga vx vi mi hurihaa kameh vx. o level ge year ga. o level exam thereyga. bt adi gandakah fahu uss gandeh anna gothah mihaaru hurihaa kameh vx v baraabaru. n yeah story v v v habbu????

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