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1. Hey reader buddies ❤❤❤ ❤❤❤my first story “Evelyn” ge first part hurihaa readers ah ves kamudhaane kamah ummedhukuran ??????????? and mistakes thah faahaga kohdhinumakee ?????alhugandah libeyne varah bodu kurierumeh ??????????? and special thanks to my fellow writer ifoo ????????????? cux ur the reason why I’m here today ??? thanks for giving me the courage???? and inspiring???? meh ❤???? hoping to see some nyc?????comments and next part insha allah tommorow what do yall think is gonana happen next? And what do u think bout the cover????? luv u all ???????????

2. luv u 2 dear…………maasha allah mi part hudher hykuri varah vureves rythi…….nd adhives ehfaharu bunelan maasha allah v v v furihama…. 🙂 🙂 🙂

   1. Awwwn???????vrh ufaavejje sis ah kamudhiyaeema ❤❤❤❤❤ so sweet ???????it means a lotto meh ?????thank u so much vvvvvvvvvvvvvv much ??????????

3. nd me first dhw yahhhhh 🙂

   1. nd one thing…….cover pic v v v v rythi v v v habeys

   2. Ooooh so happe to hear ???????that u like the pic cux I spent 3 hours on that??? yh u first next time wes e sharafu hoadhachey ??????????????

4. Yahhhh iraadhakurevviyya….ur welcome dear……luv u more

   1. Ly2m ??

5. Best of luck dear ???

   1. Thank you very much ❤❤❤❤❤????

6. Eemrnal ❤️❤️❤️❤️????… Hws u dear??? ???… Ifoo v v v v ufaavehje dear ge story eh mihaa avahah kiyaalan libunyma ??????… Thankyou dear ❤️❤️❤️??????… N v v v ufaavehje ifoo ge faraathun inspire v ma n comment ga ifoo ge bai faahaga kohleema vx v v v ufaavehje ❤️❤️❤️??????… V bodah shukuriyya Eemrnal ifoo ge faraathun inspire vegen story feshyma ???… Story ge beginning v v v reethi n sifakurunthah vx hama v v reethi ❤️❤️❤️??????… Cover vx v v reethi ???… Dhn ifoo ah faahaga vi baeh mistakes like “fenfulhin ethikolheh” eyge badhaluga “fenfulhin ethifodheh” aee ragalhu goi n dear ebain ethankolhuga liyevifa “esfiya jahaalanvx neyngifaa hurevuny eve”… At that time yaain was sitting in the car so” esfiya jahaalanvx neyngifa indhevuny eve” cause he was sitting… N some typing mistakes faahaga kohlevun… N story liyaa iru yaain ge nick name yaan ehen use kuraairu odd henn heevey ifoo ah… Dialogues ga egothah nickname use kuryma salhi vaane… In my opinion… Dear ehchekey heenukurahchey ingey… Ifoo ah faahaga vi mistakes thah bunely hama ???… Ifoo bunelaany thigothuga dear kuriah dhaashey… Eyrun In Sha Allah Eemrnal successful writer akah vaane ???❤️❤️❤️???…. I wish you all the best dear ???❤️❤️❤️… Keep up the good work ❤️❤️❤️??????… In Sha Allah u can do it ❤️❤️❤️???… I’m with you ???… If u need any help just let me know ???… If I can I will ???… Once again thankyou so much dear n ifoo v v ufaavehje miadhu ❤️❤️❤️?????????…

7. Assalaamu alaikum..???Masha ﷲ..☺☺first part vrh reethi ingey..☺☺cvr pic is Just awesome ey..???Next part avahah up kohdheyne kamah heekuran..???Dear ah dandelion ge faraathun dheyne happy news eh ebeh..???Assu bunan miulhey vhk aky dear masahkaiy kohlani koh ‘professional writer’akah vevidhaane ey..???ehennu?????..Masha allah ?Eemrnal dear ge emoji ves vrh salhi ingey..Good night?????..One more thing..Adhi cina male bridge sifakohfa inleh vrh furihama..much luvs????❤❤?????

   1. Masha allah**

8. Not bad at all after all this is your first time dho so good luck and yeah cover pic is awsome igey i think story kuriyah dhaa varakah intrest vaane hen waiting for the upcoming part once again good luck and keep going dear
   Lots of loves❤?????❤???

   1. Yaah my very first time ❤❤❤ awwwn so sweet and kind of u my dear cherry kolhu??? ??? thanks a lot in bundles ???????? yesh insha allah it will be interesting ingey ????????yh once again thank you so much ❤???? love more deah ??????

9. Maasha allah v v furihama?

   1. Thank youuuuu so much d.koral ❤❤❤

10. Hey dear why cover pic change kolly……ekam v v rythi??

    1. Eyee…boy ge pic ehves fennanee eyrakhannu ??hehe rom kohlan ?? thanks ❤❤❤

11. OMG woww…??? hama out of words ingey ❤❤❤ it’s so beautiful and I’m so curious to know what happens next ???? ur such an amazing writer and may Allah bless u ?????? next part konirakun ???? thankolheh dhigu kohlaanan genesdheycheyy e bai???? next part kiyaalan I’m so impatient ?????? avahah genesdhehchey and cover pic ves hama habeys obiness to the max ????????? luv yuh eemrnal dhoonyya ????????????❤?????

12. Riithi n next part ??

    1. Thank qeu illy deah ❤❤❤❤ 2nd prt I’ve submitted ????vrh avahah kiyaalan libeynehen heevanee.?? Maybe today or tomorrow insha allah ???

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