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1. Me first dhw.. ? haadha kurey dhen genessdhey part dhigu kohlahchey keep it up ☺?

2. wating next part ♥love it…:-)

3. I don’t like mi story genesdyfa inn gothei.. V baivaru mistakes vx Eba huri.. N phn ga dakaa vaahka mi story ga gensedyfa ehery story ei ga hunna jehey gothakah noon. Need a lot of improvement. After that this story might better

4. Miee story ehtha??
   Sukunn kuhj varah gina.
   Hama nujehey bas ehaa gina.
   Dhivegi bahuge hama thakakah nufethey.
   Anonymouse bunihen dialogs gennan jehey gothaa hilaafah genes hunnany mi vaahakaiga.
   Story script akah ves nufethey.
   Drama script akah ves nufethey.
   Bunelan beynumy vedhaane ey miee “Areen” vaahaka liyanyaa furathama dhivehi bahuge hamathakaa gavaidhu dhas kuraashey.
   Heyo edhey Haik

5. Aibaifihyaai aabaafili beynun kuran neygey liyun therieh kaareegaeh noon liyaanee kaireega liyaanee gulhaafin noon gulhaifin

6. ibaraaih kurun v sakaraaiyy. dhivehi bahuge gavaaidhuge ehaa gina mahsala eba huri. sukunuge mahsalayaa filithakuga mahsalavx, baivaru. plx improve ur writing, hope u’ll improve n u can!!

7. Hyvaagothun dhen mistory ge 3rd episode up eh nuvane. Lol

   1. Kekeke

8. mi vaahaka liyanii kudakuhjehtha…. mivaahaka mi mihaathanah kiyunu ehnme kada vaahaka.. you need lots of improvement… adhi ginain dhivehi vaahaka kiya.. hope u will improve your writting skill soon..

9. Stry v rythi but kudhikudhi mistakes ebahuri misaalakah mi miyolheny ennoon eyge badhaluga mi ulheny innaany ingey n liye nimmaalaafa check kollun aee v rangalhu kameh kiyaalaafa up kolladheynama mikahala kanthah faahagavaane ingey oralkon stry v rythi v furihama ekam stry v kurukan faahagavi when nxt prt avahah up kolladhechchey n thankolheh dhigukon ingey keep it up ❤❤❤??????

10. v liya hithun liyaa vahakeh kan igey ekam ehaa reehcheh noon ibaaraeh thakeh fahun rangalhgu vane dhw

11. Dhelofulhaa vaahaka up kuraa iru kiyaalafa up kohllachey ingey.. Fudhey varakah mistakes EBA huri..aneh bai rangalhu kihllachey.. Hurihaa kudhin ves comment kuree hama eh vaahaka thakeh.. Comment than kiyaafa hih varu Bali nukurachey… Gadha alhaa massakaiy kohfiyya konmme kujjaka ves kaamiyaab vaane.

12. A young, A first writer may get many bad comments and may not write the best,dont give up, oneday you wil learn.Improve ur writing, learn more from all around you.

13. Ehen Meehan kiyaaehchisah writer alhainulachey☺️?This is your first time to this.?….so Alan liyaairu jeheyne varah bodah try kuran??…..readers kiyaa ehchisah alhainulhachey?……ehves mihaku kiyaaehcheh nubala vaahaka liyuneema nimuny.?…ithuru vaahaka thakeh up kohlyma fans ithuruvaane……?this is your first time so obviously there would be mistakes?…..ekankan rangalhu kohlachey??…..dhen sentence tha digu koh lachey.??….maa kury☺️…..you can do it.?..try kuryma kureveyne.?…dhen baeh readers ah haddiya nukyma vi ehnun….konmehen writer dhera kuraakahnujehe…eyrah writer akah confidence eh nulibeyne….it will get broke….adhi ehfaharuves negative comments kuraa faraithakah dhannavaalan othy hadddiya nukiyaashey…..okkkkayyyy….and Areen…keep it up….???

14. Vaahaka vrh reethi?.. Just ibaaraathuge massala.. As this is ur first time kuda mistakes thah hunnaane.. But its ok.. V learn from our mistakes.. Keep it up?❤

15. I agree with you ash.. Kuh huriyaa vx bunan vaany reethi kh hurt nuvaa gothah.. Everyone won’t be perfect.. N areen dnt give up you can do it. Mistakes happen.. we just need self confidence to improve it.. N some times negative comments vx libeyne.. Rude kh vx meehun echis kiyaane that’s how some people are.. But don’t let those things discourage you.. You need to prove them that you can do it… Good luck??

    1. ofcourse. u can improve… 🙂 🙂

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