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1. Nice
   Tbh it’s a little bit short

   1. Next time I will make it a little bit longer

2. masha allah reethi
   first time of writing viyyaa IA future ga u can do better
   readers ge comments thakun improve kuran jehey kankan balaafa improve kuryma miah vure dhn kuriyah liyamun anna parts thah maa furihama vaane
   thankolheh dhigukohlaafa sifa kurun thah genesdheveythww try kohlaa n u can read mi site ga meehun liyefa huhna vhk thah e meehun liyefa hunna fenvarah nuliyevunas vhk ginain kiima creative mindset eh binaa vaane, mi part kiyaafa vs next part ah inthizaar kureven fashaifi. kurin bunihn e kan kan improve kuran try kuran feshiima ur writings will improve a lot I’m also a girll who likes to write dhivehi strs. ehnvgn hama I’m reading vrh baevaru vhk thah
   IA U CAN DO BETTER

   1. thanks for the advice

3. i think if you follow the advice given above you can make the story more interesting for the readers to read and improve cuz idk if this a trailer or a part cuz i cant really make out anything of whats happening and read stories from this site with good story writing or i personally recommend reading from news sites with actual writers to get a idea

   1. Okay

4. Mashallah vrh reethi
   When next

   1. Post koh fa innaany

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