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1. Small mistakes are there but you can improve it. story is really beautiful. Hope to see next part soon.
   Keep up the good work.
   Btw when is the next part?

2. What is this?? V baivaru mistakes eba huri. Huvany maa avas aruvaalaifa liyefa hurihen and maa bodahvx kuru. Next part ga mistakes thah rangalhu kohlaaa nd dhigukohla eyrun hama v best vaane ??

3. Too short

4. v rythi feshumeh ingeyy.. kudhi kudhi mistakes ebuhuri.. u can improve it.. nd dhigukohllachey dhn oi bai… bst of luk 😉 😉

5. Reethi

6. Varah kuru. Ekamuves reethi vaanehen heevany

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8. the story is very nice and v gina mistakes abahuri btw u can improve it…….. dhivehi bahuga enduga kiyaany vaaaka dhakkaairu vaahaka liyaairu7 liyaany endugai when is next prt… i hope u wil rechheck before clickin publish
   gud luck 😉

   faharugavx lillygirl mihen mi bunany naai dherakuraakah nn ddnt even think about it i will say u will improve

   gud luk;)

   1. amihla story thah reethi kamuge vaahaka nudhehkiyya rangalhuvaany. mihaaru ehn meehunge story ah faadu kiyan e nikuthy lilly girl. naai ekey lilly girl ekey vaki thafaatheh neiy mikamuga

9. Kehukuraanan ge innany thaa sukuneh.. alif sukuneh noon..

10. heheheh…. mee dhen meehun vaahak liyaathee liyan ulhey meeheh… publish kurumuge kurin liyunu dhe paragraphves ehffaharuves kiyaanulaaa… recheck kurumeh neiy… liyun theriyakuvejjiyyaa atleast kiyaalan rangalhu dhw mistakes huritho balaalan… heeevanee meehakah koh dhey kameh hen…. typing mistakes ves baivaru….. adhi furathama liun veema vane dhw furihama kolleveytho recheck kuranves…. dhen vaahaka nimmaafa nimunee nooneee nunimey ekeyves neiy jahaafa…. mihaa kurukoh vaahaka genesdhenyaa… maadhama paragrapheh genesdhyfa anedhuvahu folhuvatheh… dhen nuves liyaane… esfiyainves vejje liyuntherikamah hajoo nujahaa kahala liyun publish kuran…. kada.. v v v v kada

    1. liyan ingay myha liyan v nu dhw atleast someone tried to write a story and yu anonymous just makin fun of it ladheh ves nuganey dhw hayae kuda gotheh neh myhaagan daa faadu kiyas bodu varu hithah araa dhivehin ge therey mikahala gothehneh myhun ulhey baa a ves so sad…………

11. Ur right anonymous….

12. vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv hadiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii dhuniyen enme hadi eee uu uuu

13. Anonymous thibunee hama thedheh…. ladhun boa halaaku… midhen meehun vaahaka liyaathy liyefa oii ehcheh…….??

14. Anonymous thibunee thedheh…. Vaahaka varah varah hadi

15. Pss pss meehun vaahaka liyaathy liyaathan vihyya fehnnanee. Neiy fenvarun kan kan kuran noolhebala.. hus mistakes bahuge gavaidhuga ces.. furathama dhiv dhakuran dhaan feney

16. Faadu kiyumaki kiyuntheringe kameh . ekam faadu kiyan ves vaki limit ei onnanee dhw ? Konme miihaku ves furathama kameh kuran fashaanii hurihaa kamakun perfect vegenei nuun dhw ? Kithrme molhu PhD fenvaruge miihakah ves olhi mistake ei hedhidhrne dhw ? Eiii kii emiihaayah niingeyy thy Ku nun dhw ? Ehennuunas dhrn vaahaka kiyaane kiyun therein ves reader yah respect koh mistake idhehjjihya bnedheyni dhw ? Ekam ehen baa mi vani ?? Vaahaka hadiyey kiyaane ladhu gathumuge badhaluga reader yah bnevunu ehchaka standard ei blaafa ladhugathyma maa rythi vaane kanneynge dhw ? Shame for those ……

    1. vahaka liyan hiyvaru dheyny zarrehge minvarahves hunaru hurinamathaa. furathana dhivehi bas ves neygey. dhivehi bahuge hana thakaa qavaidh neygey. mikankan neygi story liyan ulhunyma hiyvaru dheyny moyain. aan ehenya aharemenge ves language viyya mee. migothah language ahves huthuru araa gothah vahaka liyunyma rulhi eh noontha annaany. site eh ovefa story upliad kureven othythy ehchakah ehcheh liyumah vure thimaa gaiga huri hunareh kuri aruvan ulhuniyya maa rangalhu vaane. insaanunnah kuh jeheyny ves. ekamaku miee boduvaru. phd hadhaafa hunna myhaku noonas grade 3 ga ulhey kudhinves miah vure dhivehi bahah faritha vaane. aftrall its our mothr tongue viyya.

17. Everybody makes mistakes..reethi kon bunedhinun ei as readers sumthin we shud do..nobody has da right to give such negative comments..did anyone force u to read it??u better not read it if u can’t give a positive comment..mihen alhugandu mibunee to u all n especially emme fahu fas comment dhin beyfulhunnah..thihaa molhu bayaku y readin such stories n y don’t u try writing one with no mistakes at all..alhugandu suggest kuran thibeyfulhunnah story eh up kuran to c hw great u ppl r in writing stories..

    1. nd faz gaz raz viyas heyo. miee dhivehi vaahaka site eh. mi site thakah readers vannaany dhiv vahaka kiyan. ekakuves ummeedheh nukuraane mikahala thaakun thaaku nujehey ehcheh liyefa upkohfa innaane kamakah. nd story ehga huri reethikameh ingeyny kymathaa. agu huri vaguthu spend kohgen kyma mi ingeny dhn annaany rulhi noon koahchehtha? if u r a true fan of dhivehi stories dan u will say the same abt dis story. thi favr kurany writer ah nt to story.

18. Your brilliant Shelly .. Of course ur ryt Shelly .. Shame on those readers … Emiiihunge standard mihaaru miothy fennaakannu …

19. Dhrn mi readers akii hurihaa gothrkun ves perfect miihun vihyya … Ehn miihakah mistake ei hedhuniima ekamah eichihikiyan .., shame .. Shame .. Shame

    1. mistake ehthaa hedhifa eothy. rangalhah kiyaalabala kithah mistake tho hedhifa or hadhaafa eothy. dhiv ehi language ahves malaamaaiy kohfa.

20. U r right shelly..thikahala kudhin thee best readers..good..

    1. best readers o. jahaaha berakah nashanya best dancers. kuraa konme kamakah sanaa kiyanya best humans. shame on u guys. myhun hahdhany thi. hajam viyas nuviyas naai kibayaku story liyaane gaabil kameh neiy. mee hagygaiy. faz men thibey kudhin moya hahdhan.

21. mivaahakaiga liyefa oyy ehchehgga kithahmme mistake eh othas egen bunedhey ehcheh get vejjiyaamun enimuny nootho.comment thah fenifa alhugandu v ladhu ganehjje.. liyaa meehaage massakathuge kuri maraalumuge badhaluga balaiganevey gothakah faadu kiyamaa tho. thiyabeyfulhunnah fenuny liyumugai v kuhthah ekani dhetho. alhugandah vaahakaige feshun v kamudhiya.

22. sumone kiyaadheyn v nu dhivehi bahuge hamathah eynayah.hunaru huregen dhw liyefa eothy vaahaka,ekan kuran beynun vaathy dhw eyna liyaany.hamam knmme knmme meehaku nuhunnaane vaahaka liyaakah ehaa shaugverikameh.bunelan othy meehun kuraahaa comment akah negetive rply kurumuge badaluga kamu nudhanyaa vaahaka nukiyaa hurebala dhw..and y do u care so much? fashaigannairu komme meehaku perfect vaakah nujehey adhi nuves vaane.

    1. point to b noted. shauguverikan nuhunna kanthah nukuraany. mee aadhaige kameh nooney. dhiv vahaka in dhiv bahuge molhu dhera nimmaane myhunves thibeyne. mi vahaka kiyaifa dhiv bahah ves myhun kuraany malaamaaiy. ehaa shaguverikan nethiyya liyefa thimaage gaaiy myhunnah kiyaalan dhinyma nimunynu? konmehen site akah upload nukuriyakas. site thakah vannaane ethah bayaku. n dhivehi bahuge hama thah kiyaidheykah sumone akah nujeheyne. ehaa vahaka liyan beynumiyya dhiv bahuge hamathakaa qavaudhu dhaskohdhey thanakah gosgen dhaskuraany. eah fahun vahaka liyaany. liyuntheriyaa liyefa othy eyna ge ekani language akun noon. ei aharemen hurihaa dhivehinge ves bas. ehnvyma aharemenge maadharee bahah malaamaaiy koh huthuru vaa gothah liyunyma nuthibeveyne dhoo himeynun laigeneh.

23. adhi bunelan othy mithaa comment koffa thibi emmenakyves vaahaka liuvvaa ulhuvvaa beyfulhun tho ey? hadiey hadiey hadiey kiyaairu kihaa yageen kamehtho othy thibeyfulhaa ah mi fenvaruge nuvatha mahvvure furihama vaahakaeh liyumuge? coffident huriyyaa vaahakaeh liyelaa alhuganumen kiun therinnaa hissaa kolla dhinu ae v edhey kameh ingey tho

    1. readers nujehey writers akah vaakah. adhi vahaka akah judge kuran ingeyny hama ekani writers akahves noon. thihaa confident othiyya dhivehi usthaazakah mi vahaka dhahkaba miah ginain libeny positive cmmnt tho negative cmmnt tho balan. thee naai ah heyo edhey baeh viyya eyna ge kibaiga huri hunareh kuri aruvan eyna ah hiyvaru dhybala.

24. Aslu readers akah nu eh onnaane vaahaka jugde kurumuge hudha eh dheefa readers jeheyny hama ekani
    Writer kairy rangalhu kohlan v thankolhe kiyaadheyn! Emmen ekhoh echehi kiyaigatheema writer ves hih hama nujeheyne! Everyone is not a perfect writer dhoa ekamaku perfect writer akah vann readers ge faadu kiyunythah beynun kureveyne

25. aroo ah majalee thivarah vaahaka ah ehchis kiyaa iru vaahaka keema..
    ehves meehakee eme perfect meeeheh nun mistake ves hedheyne.mistake thah reethi koh bunedhineema dhen faharakun rangalhu kureveyne rite??????

26. Sumone thihaa molhiyya vaahaka eh liyefa dhahkaalabala..heevany meena mee dhuvahaku mistakeh nuhadhaa meeheh heh..emme ginain ehen meehun ladhu gahnaavaafa kuh dhahkan masakai kuraa meehun ei emme ginain kuh kuraa meehun..kusheh kurevunas reethi kon bunedheveyne dhw..konmehen nujehe thivaru meehun vaahaka nuliyyaaniyye bunaakah..sumone furathama sculah dhiya iru hurihaa ehcheh engigentha dhiyaee..bayaku u ge mistakes rangalhu kohgen dhw kiyeveyne..kithahme ehchehi thakeh engunas beynumeh nethennu eyge..meehunnah ihthiraam nukurevey thaanga malaamai thikurany..manners eh neh dhw ehves..shame on those who didn’t teach u manners..huh..

27. Ehves ehcheh neygey meehakah bunedhen masakai kuraa meehunnakee moyain kamahvanya furathama hingandhaskohdhin u ge parentun ves ei moyain dhw..thigothah meehun judge kuran adhi only intelligent meehunnah ehchehi bunedhen jeheyne kamah gabool kuraani kiburuverin..thihaa molhu kamah dhauvaa kuraa meehun amilla vaahaka hadhaagen kiyanveenu..nooniyya dhuniye gabool kuraa fenvaruge meehun liyaa vaahaka ekani kiyanveenu..really I hate ppl who put others down when they try to achieve sumthin in life..

    1. mashehves nubehen dhe kaege parentx akaa. emyhunnehves nubehey dhw kaleyaka. n kuda iruhsure dhaskuraa kanthakaa mi kamaa haas thafaathu. kuda iru dhaskurany necessity kanthah. ekam story liyumaky necessity kameh noon. ehves myhaku majboorehves nukuraane story liyaakah. so ekan onna goiy balaafa ekamuga ingen jehey kanthah dhaskohfa start kuryma hunnaany rangalhah. n perfect ge vahaka eh mashehves nudhahkan. mi site ga dhenves hury perfect vahaka thakeh nooney. bt ekudhinnah hiyvaru dhyfa eba huri dhw? ekam mi liyuntheriyaa nikuthy dhiv bahah malaamaaiy kuran. vahaka aky koahchehkan ingeyne dhiv subject kiyevi konme myhakah. aharemennaky vaki liyuntheri ehge fans eh noon ekam dhiv vahakaige fanun. ehnvyma vahaka ey kiyaafa migothah liyunyma hiyvareh nudheveyne. kae rangalhah kiyaaba aiy liyefa othy thaa sukunuge badhaluga alif ibifili jahaigen. rulhi ais raiy vegen liyanves raiy kiyaa iru alif ibifili jahaafa. mee too much. raiy aiy mihunnany enme kuda kudhinnahves ingeyne ehchis.

28. Sumone thibunee hama rangalhah… Alifu sukuneh thaa sukuneh vaki kuran engenee kee noon.. dhen meehaku commenteh kuraairah emmen jeheythe ehchehi kiyan … vaahaka kamudhaa meehun kamudhey kamunudhaa meehun kamunudhey vess kiyaane dhw….. vaahaka up kuraairu bunefakaa neh dhw hamaekani positive comment kuraashekey n typying mistakevess evarah ebahuri….. meedhen fukeh boduvaru piss piss n vaahaka feshey thaaku liyefaka neii mee dhivehi bahah malaamai kuran liyunu vaahakaekey …

    1. mistake hadumaky goheh kamakah masheh nudhene hurin nd u thaathu nd someone vaahaka liyan thihaa molhihyaa vaahakaeh ganes dhen v nu kalenga parents manners nukiyaadhey aann dhw kihineh kiyaa dheny thikahala gotheh nah myhun nah mi meehun amihla parents inves hun naany fukakah hadhaafa kan neyge ladhehves nuganey chee chee

29. Sumone it is not necessity..it is necessary..thee vaavarakee..meehunnah malaamai kuraairu watz ur fenvaru??n dhivehi bahah huthuru araafaanethre dheravaairu furathama dhivehi bahuge kurin aharemen emme iskameh dheynjehey aharemenge islam dheenuge reethi aadha ehves u gayaku nethennu..meehunna muhaathabu kuraane reethi gothehves dhaskohdhevifaeh neh dhw..i’m sympathise wid u..

    1. I agree faz…. dhivehi bahah loabikuraavaru ingey someone ge liyun thakun dhw ehaa loabivaairu keehvetha English in type kohffa ehunnany english word ves ehaa ginain beynun kurey, mistakes ves ebahuri comment gaves…. shame

30. hey!hurihaa kudhinnah varah salaam.mi furusathuga hurihaa kudhinge comments thakah ihthiraam kuraa vaahaka dhannavaalan.hiyyhama nujehifa thibi kudhinge kibain maafah edhen.hiyyvaru dhin kudhinnah shukuru adhaa kuran.mi page ga alhugandu liysnfeshi vaahaka liye nimmumah ithurah beynun nuvaathee ekamah mi page ge hurihaa kudhinge kibain maafah edhen.adhives effaharu hurihaa kiyun therinnah ves shukuru dhannavan.

31. looks like you got wat u wanted sumone.shame on u

    1. yeah gotheh neh myheh eeii sumone myhun kuraa bura masah kathah faadu kiyakas i think its above the limit so sad nd sumone ehaa liyaa molhiyaa liyumeh ganes dhen v nu dhw ehen myhun ge liyu mah faadu nukiyaa dhw thikahala gatheh nah myyhun vaahaka nuki yaa sumone

32. Mujhe is kahani ki samjh na I.

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